加拿大华人论坛 加拿大留学移民询问信这样写行吗？

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8[FONT=宋体]月[/FONT]19[FONT=宋体]号投的，到现在还没任何反应，想写信询问，不知信这样写行不行，表达得对不对？包括用词是否得当，语法有无错误，尤其是，老外能否看懂，知道我要说什么。请高手指点。[/FONT][FONT=宋体][/FONT] [FONT=宋体][FONT=宋体]Dr Sir:[/FONT]​[FONT=宋体]I am an applicant to immigrate to [/FONT][FONT=宋体]Canada[/FONT][FONT=宋体] from [/FONT][FONT=宋体]Shanghai[/FONT][FONT=宋体] [/FONT][FONT=宋体]China[/FONT][FONT=宋体]. My career number is XXXX.My name is XXXX. I sent my schedules and fees to you on 2009-08-15. K・Campbell received my letter on 2009-08-19. From then on, I have not received any mail or email from you. That is why I am writing to you to ask the result about my application. I would like to know weather you have dealt with my case? I guess maybe you have sent the result to me but I did not receive it for some reasons unknown.If so , Please contact me again. [/FONT]​[FONT=宋体] I am looking forward to receiving your answer letter as soon as possible.[/FONT]​[FONT=宋体] [/FONT]​[FONT=宋体] Yours sincerely,[/FONT]​[FONT=宋体] XXXX[/FONT]​[FONT=宋体]My email address:[/FONT]​[FONT=宋体][/FONT]​[FONT=宋体]XXXX [/FONT]​[FONT=宋体]My mail address: [/FONT]​[FONT=宋体]Department of XXXX[/FONT]​[FONT=宋体]Shanghai XXXX Universty[/FONT]​[FONT=宋体]No.XXX XXXXRoad[/FONT][FONT=宋体]，XXXX[/FONT][FONT=宋体]District[/FONT]​[FONT=宋体]Shanghai[/FONT][FONT=宋体]，[/FONT][FONT=宋体]200000[/FONT]​[FONT=宋体]China[/FONT][FONT=宋体][/FONT]​[FONT=宋体] [/FONT]​[FONT=宋体] [/FONT]​ [/FONT]

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准备登陆多伦多回复: 询问信这样写行吗？我能看懂，呵呵。

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回复: 询问信这样写行吗？好像你的地址什么的，要放在最上面吧。

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回复: 询问信这样写行吗？我准备写平信过去，这是信的内容。信封的格式我还没研究呢

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准备登陆多伦多回复: 询问信这样写行吗？我建议你在信里写上你的生日。

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回复: 询问信这样写行吗？Dr Sir/Madam（西方讲究尊重女性）:My name is XXXX. I submitted an application to immigrate to Canada from Shanghai China (Federal Skilled Workers Category, NOC Code XXXX). My application materials and fees were mailed to your office via courier on August 15, 2009 and received by KCampbell on August 19, 2009. It has been over 70 days since the delivery of the packet and I have not received any mail or email about the status of my application. I would highly appreciate if you could update me on the status of my application. I am concerned about the possibility of your correspondence being lost in the mail. I am looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible. Yours sincerely.

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2021年AP心理学第一班7月7日开课；统计学开始招生。首选视频，大温哥华地区面授。Dr Sir/Madam（西方讲究尊重女性）: My name is XXXX. I submitted an application to immigrate to Canada from Shanghai China (Federal Skilled Workers Category, NOC Code XXXX). My application materials and fees were mailed to your office via courier on August 15, 2009 and received by KCampbell on August 19, 2009. It has been over 70 days since the delivery of the packet and I have not received any mail or email about the status of my application. I would highly appreciate if you could update me on the status of my application. I am concerned about the possibility of your correspondence being lost in the mail. I am looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible. Yours sincerely.点击展开...谢谢你

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