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老公说商业计划书搞不明白，请教高手怎么弄啊。中介让我老公自己填写他的一些专业东东。写不好会不会拒签啊。Business PlanPlease provide more detailed information on the following sections of the business plan: ProductIn your business plan you have mentioned the global forecast for sensors market, industrial applications, their importance and their classification (temperature, liquid, pressure and flow). Also, you included information of the global market of the UPS and their importance in relation with the negative consequences that could arise from the failure in power management in the telecommunications industry. Yet, your product is not being explained enough.Please describe:- What specific types of sensors you will repair or sale: uses, features and cost.- What specific types of UPS you will sell or repair: What kind of technology they use, features, use, cost and regulations. Market researchYou have explained business opportunities in the large-scaled industries in St. John (e.g. Moosehead and Irving Refinery). The potential business opportunity in your business plan has been based on these industries use and need of this technology for process automation control. Yet, your market research should be more specific:- Which kind of sensors for process automation control does your target market use or will use that you will sell/repair- Which specific features and benefits your product has compared to their current suppliers- How does your product or service satisfy their needs- Market growth potential (New Brunswick (local) and national market data)- Market share RegulationsInclude more research about your specific product within the framework of ‘Energy Efficiency Regulations” or other regulations related to sale, import and manufacture of UPS. Regards, Luz LimaImmigration Program OfficerDepartment of Post-Secondary Education Training and LabourPopulation Growth Division, Immigration BranchNew Brunswick Provincial Nominee Program500 Beaverbrook Court, 5th Floor, Suite 500P.O. Box 6000, Fredericton, New Brunswick, Canada E3B 5H1Telephone: (506) 444-2720(506) 444-2720E-mail: [email protected] CallSend SMSAdd to SkypeYou'll need Skype CreditFree via Skype

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回复: 以为NB获批，却是一封补件信--请大家帮忙看看这种情况是不是拒签的可能性比较的大？

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回复: 以为NB获批，却是一封补件信--请大家帮忙看看不算大，写清楚就好写太笼统了

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回复: 以为NB获批，却是一封补件信--请大家帮忙看看给你补件就是给你机会，说明你总体比较优秀，舍不得马上拒绝你，这是我个人看法.希望还是很大。加油！

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这个应该是C 料后的补料信；看上去现在NB移民官要求蛮高的，有些要求过高，毕竟就过去考察了5天！！

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是补料信，还有机会

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愛之深，恨不得做鉅贾去吃飯旅行过好生活 赏 2014-03-27#7 C 16 $0.00 中介不包括商业计划吗？

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如果选择了中介，辅导做的不够么？如果是DIY，自己的考察工作不够到位。

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抓住机会，认真回答每一个问题，让他们信服你的方案！成败就在你的回答上，他们有疑惑才来信问的。你现在要做的就是解惑答疑，把自己的经营所想有条理有步骤清晰地给他们描绘一下。一切都说清了，他们能想象出你的蓝图伟业，你就基本通过了。如果体检等过关，剩下的就是等毕业的时间了。

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