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WOW~~~~~~终于考完啦~兴奋~！~~！~！~我昨晚查的分数，620，TWE5.5，总分不高，只想说说TWE。老实说，这次TWE成功的关键在于考前一天：我前一天看了TWE题库未考版，只带着一个目的找些论据并记下来，其实题库看起来题量很大，但不少题目都是有关联的，许多论据都可通用。几个小时看下来还是挺轻松的，感觉思路清晰了，但一定要把论据尽量记在脑中，第二天如果幸运的话，现炒现卖。这次的考题也是题库上的，我前一天考虑过，虽然记得不清楚，但当时思如泉涌，想到了许多论据，这和前一天的准备一定分不面，而且前提是语言表达本身不成大问题(英语过四级表达也就基本没问题了吧，所以备考的朋友一定要有信心)，我个人觉得TWE用清晰流畅的简单句同样能拿高分，因为纯语言方面很难占明显优势。文章靠结构(所以我还是准备了一些简单的模板，千万不要太多空话，留出时间写自己的论据)，内容靠例子(就是论据) 真的觉得考前的准备很重要，接下来我从我准备的诸多模板中挑出5套最有代表性的分享给大家，[特别说明：以下模板均摘自考托专业网站和论坛，比如太傻：http://www.taisha.org/test/toefl寄托：http://gter.ce.cn 小马过河，秦苏珊英语中心http://www.susanchyn.com.cn/，新东方等等]一、观点对比型1 　　Some people like A; others like B. Which one do you prefer―A or B? 　　(1) No doubt, I choose A, because there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages. But B on the other hand, has advantages no more than its disadvantages. 　　The most important benefit of A is that___________________. 　　To achieve the same effect, B will__________________. 　　Another benefit of A, which B almost cannot achieve, is that___________________. 　　Although B also has its seemingly profound advantages, it can only be achieved conditionally because_________________________. 　　After understanding the reasoning above, it is quite safe now to say: to choose A is a wise action. 　　(2) Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, contradict A. Personally, I would prefer__________ because I think A has more advantages. 　　There are numerous reasons why________, and I would here explain a few of the most important ones. The main reason is that___________. It can be given a concrete example_____________. 　　Another reason why I advocate the attitude of A is that___________. Take the case of a thing that_______________. 　　One very strong argument for A is that__________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that_____________________. 　　Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, __________. 　　But if all these factors are complicated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_________________. 　　二、观点对比型2 　　Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support. 　　(1) Some people believe that________________. Other people hold the opinion that_________. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinions about it. 　　For A, ___________________. 　　But this also demonstrates that______________. 　　Moreover, _______________________. 　　B, on the other hand, _______________. For example, ________________. 　　In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways: First, _________________. Second, ______________________. 　　(2) A and B are two totally different ideas that have caused a heated debate for a long period. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we do not see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs. 　　Some people believe B because______________. These people point out the fact that______________. They also argue that_______________________. 　　However, other people stand on a very different ground, they believe that____________. They firmly point out that______________________. An example can give the details of this argument: ___________________. In addition, ____________________________. 　　In a word, A is too temptating not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has________. 三、支持反对型　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? AAA. 　　(1) There is no need for me to put any emphasis on what the advantages of AAA are. ___________________. Many people believe that____________________. 　　However, I disagree with the title statement because I consider___________________. 　　On the other hand, one of the notorious disadvantages of AAA is that_______________. The modern example of this is_____________________. So if this is prevalent, _______________. Another factor shows that__________________. So, as I see it, _________. 　　(2) Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the arguments on both sides. People who support AAA usually give some, even all of the following reasons. 　　The first is that_______________________. 　　The second is that____________________________. 　　Third, ___________________________________. 　　Generally, people who attack AAA claim that ______________________. They also often say that there will be problems of ____________________. 　　As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that there are three main reasons why I support AAA. Firstly, ___________________. Secondly, ______________. Furthermore, __________________. 四、观点选择型　　…A, B, C, D… Which do you choose? 　　(1) It appears, in so many aspects, very difficult to prefer one to another because all of them have their advantages and disadvantages to the extent that it is hard to distinguish. 　　Yet that does not mean they are of the same to me. To be frank, I would prefer A if personal quality is considered as a criterion to choose things. 　　Then why do I prefer A? I like it because it can _______________, thus makes me ______________. 　　There is another reason why I choose A, in terms of ________, __________. No wonder, it again brings me convenience that I cannot get if I choose any one of the others. 　　That last reason is that_____________________. 　　In conclusion, everybody wants to choose the one that fits him/her. So it is of great benefits for me to choose. 　　(2) How to do XXX/Whether the traditional methods such as A, B and so on or the modern method for example C and D has its advantages and disadvantages. Which you would prefer depends on your own experience, life style and emotional concern. However, I would prefer C. There are three advantages of C as follow: 　　This can trace back to my childhood. Once with curiosity, I__________________. 　　Yet another reason is that_________. I can quote a common example. _______________. 　　Then why I do not like others? For example, why I do not like A? Because I have a bad experience with it. _______________. So, even when anyone mentioned it, I would catch a feeling of fear. 　　There are still many other reasons that can account for my fondness for it, but the obvious ones have been presented as above. 五、问题分析型　　…XXX…What do you think about it? 　　(1) There are numerous approaches to solving XXX/impacts on XXX/characteristics of XXX, and I would explore the most conspicuous ones here. 　　One of the primary method/One of the primary impacts/ One of the primary characteristics, to my mind, is that_________________. 　　A more subtle point which we must consider is that___________________. 　　In addition/Furthermore, __________________. 　　In conclusion/Taking into account of all these methods/effects/aspects, we may reach the conclusion that________________________. 　　(2) Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, three conspicuous aspects are as follows. 　　One of the primary causes is that______________________. 　　XXX also results from_______________________. 　　____________________is responsible for XXX, as well. 　　To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A, B and C are three main contributors to XXX我觉得大家把这五类模板练熟练了就够用了，网络上有大量的模板，但是都是围绕这几类变换的，怎么说我也是个网虫啦，没有报过什么托福培训班，都是自己通过网络，参考书籍自己学的，我真的觉得网上的资源真的够用了，真没必要报什么培训班：）最后在推荐几个很不错的提高TOEFL写作的网站http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/index2.html美国名校普渡大学的写作技巧,非常使用http://lrs.ed.uiuc.edu/students/fwalters/toeflwrite.html美国著名大学UIUC网站的学习资料http://www.gettoefl.com/toefl_essay/introduction_TWE.htm国外的TOEFL网站http://ec.hku.hk/writingmachine/香港大学写作技巧网址好啦，希望我的经验及建议能给大家带来帮助哦！！！！！！加油！~~~~希望大家都考出理想的分数！！！

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