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作为难度最高的流程图今年出现的频率有些非同寻常，很多同学害怕考流程图，因为平时不常练习此类题目，所以造成了不自信，其实完全可以依靠自己克服这个问题。流程图其实在剑桥很多课程中都是很基础的一种报告类型。而且有时候它更加死板，没有什么很大灵活度，所以我们更不用惶恐不安，趋之若骛。你可以把看你作文的考官当作一个盲人对待，你在跟他叙述一个事物的产生过程。只要把先后顺序理清，用词妥当，就会觉得它本身不难。描述流程的文章，有一定的规律性叙述要点可以参照查看自己是否写到：1． 首先说明是做什么工作的过程，目的是什么2． 准备工作3． 按时间/过程先后描述4． 结果5． 简单总结（可有可无） 描述一个实物/器具的工作过程，文章应分以下几点： 1． 实物是什么，做什么用的2． 基本结构3． 工作过程4． 简单总结
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三千日夜吟愁赋，一亿白发尽满头。梦入枫林遍芳丛，觉来惆怅恨无数。 [[FONT=宋体]加拿大，请在不远的地方等我http://www.canadameet.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=263009][/FONT] [[FONT=宋体]起程-[FONT=宋体]献给[/FONT]91[FONT=宋体]旧政和[/FONT][FONT=宋体]新政的同路人[/FONT]][/FONT] [[FONT=宋体]一个等待移民者的内心独白http://www.canadameet.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=255315[FONT=宋体]][/FONT][/FONT]回复: 雅思考试流程图类写作规则及常用词句总结描述过程，流程常用句子：the following diagraph shows the structure of……the picture illustrates……it mainly consists of……it works as follows.it always involves following steps.the whole procedure can be dividedinto…stages描述流程，过程的常用过渡性词语：firstlysecondlythirdly/finallythe first step is tothe next step is tothe last step is tothe first stage involvesin the next stagein the following stagein the last stagefirst of allto begin withnextthenlaterat the same timehttp://a4.yeshj.com/rd/35036/simultaneouslysubsequentlyconsequentlybefore thisduringafter thisin the course ofin order to/in order not toin order thatso as to/so as not to
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三千日夜吟愁赋，一亿白发尽满头。梦入枫林遍芳丛，觉来惆怅恨无数。 [[FONT=宋体]加拿大，请在不远的地方等我http://www.canadameet.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=263009][/FONT] [[FONT=宋体]起程-[FONT=宋体]献给[/FONT]91[FONT=宋体]旧政和[/FONT][FONT=宋体]新政的同路人[/FONT]][/FONT] [[FONT=宋体]一个等待移民者的内心独白http://www.canadameet.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=255315[FONT=宋体]][/FONT][/FONT]回复: 雅思考试流程图类写作规则及常用词句总结雅思流程图满分范文含点评《砖块的制作》 WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufacturedfor the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisonswhere relevant. Write at least 150 words. Brick manufacturing
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三千日夜吟愁赋，一亿白发尽满头。梦入枫林遍芳丛，觉来惆怅恨无数。 [[FONT=宋体]加拿大，请在不远的地方等我http://www.canadameet.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=263009][/FONT] [[FONT=宋体]起程-[FONT=宋体]献给[/FONT]91[FONT=宋体]旧政和[/FONT][FONT=宋体]新政的同路人[/FONT]][/FONT] [[FONT=宋体]一个等待移民者的内心独白http://www.canadameet.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=255315[FONT=宋体]][/FONT][/FONT]回复: 雅思考试流程图类写作规则及常用词句总结满分范文 http://a4.yeshj.com/rd/35036/The process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlinedin seven consecutive steps. First the raw material, clay, which was just below the surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a digger. Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller areas, which fall through the metal gridonto a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of clay. Sand and water are added to make a homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut into brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter. Those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. The dried bricks are then transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high temperature oven. First they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200 ℃ -1300 ℃ . This process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber. Once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and delivered to their final destination, be it a building site or storage. (215 words) 考官评语 Band 9 This response fully satisfies the requirements of the task. All key features of each stage of the process are appropriatelyand accurately presented. An excellent overview is given at the beginning of the response and this skilfully incorporatespart of the rubric, changing the grammatical function, to give a brief summary of the whole process. The message is very easy to read, with seamless cohesion that attracts no attention. Paragraphing, linking and referencing are all skilfully managed. The language used is very fluent and sophisticated. A wide range of vocabulary and structures are used with full flexibility and accuracy. Only rare minor ‘slips’ can be found and these do not detract from the high rating.
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三千日夜吟愁赋，一亿白发尽满头。梦入枫林遍芳丛，觉来惆怅恨无数。 [[FONT=宋体]加拿大，请在不远的地方等我http://www.canadameet.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=263009][/FONT] [[FONT=宋体]起程-[FONT=宋体]献给[/FONT]91[FONT=宋体]旧政和[/FONT][FONT=宋体]新政的同路人[/FONT]][/FONT] [[FONT=宋体]一个等待移民者的内心独白http://www.canadameet.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=255315[FONT=宋体]][/FONT][/FONT]回复: 雅思考试流程图类写作规则及常用词句总结最新雅思流程图《巧克力的制作》（含范文深度点评） 雅思作文考流程图考试的可能性逐渐增大，最近考试的同学一定要准备一下！ 题目: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The iillustrations above show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the informaiton by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
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三千日夜吟愁赋，一亿白发尽满头。梦入枫林遍芳丛，觉来惆怅恨无数。 [[FONT=宋体]加拿大，请在不远的地方等我http://www.canadameet.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=263009][/FONT] [[FONT=宋体]起程-[FONT=宋体]献给[/FONT]91[FONT=宋体]旧政和[/FONT][FONT=宋体]新政的同路人[/FONT]][/FONT] [[FONT=宋体]一个等待移民者的内心独白http://www.canadameet.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=255315[FONT=宋体]][/FONT][/FONT]回复: 雅思考试流程图类写作规则及常用词句总结高分范文深度点评The diagram shows the stages in the processof making chocolate.所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process：整个过程, stage：阶段，step：步骤Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia.开头不能冲上来就直接介绍cacao tree，而是通过主题词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一般现在时流程图特点之二：大量使用定语从句，将有关联的两句话连接。流程图特点之三：大量使用被动语态The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans. Firstly,流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词when the pods are ripe,they are harvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.三个句子的并列：“句子A，句子B and 句子C”。During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown.流程图特点之五：要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in large sacksand transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.After being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. This part is not needed for making chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.
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