加拿大外贸
欢迎提宝贵意见。Dear Friend,
Good day!
It's really glad to know you!
We are factory of manufacturing XXX, used for Automobiles, Motorcycles(including Tuning Vehicles), Heavy Duty Machinery, Land Mowers, Air Compressors and Industrial Uses in Mainland China, we are reputed for high quality products and good service among our customers. We are ISO 9001&TS16949 certified, and all the production follow strict quality control process. We know you are a professional company too, so we'd like to contact you and your esteemed company. We are a serious, reliable and good quality manufacturer.
Thanks for your valuable time to read this letter and we appreciate for your kind attention. We are looking forward to establishing a long-term & mutual beneficial partnership with you in the near future.
If you have any inquiries, we will be glad to provide further details upon request.
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我是老外的话，直接删除。
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你都是高级会员了，看来是上混了很长时间了啊
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真是老师傅啊...我们都是中级的你还是我们的奋斗目标呢...哈哈哈哈
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还行，估计英语水平不错，如果把条理更分明一些，这样更好
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看不下去，要是不是以英语为母语的国家，估计更没有耐心看。
建议发几个产品图片给客户看看也许更实在点，更有说服力，路过！
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还可以啊···
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中间那一段，太长，没耐心看
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为啥直接删除呢？
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大家别看高级会员啊。没什么的，只是时间长而已。最近发开发信回复很少，所以想让大家帮忙诊查下这封开发信。
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楼主，你知道吗，你的开发信有一个很严重的问题，就是主语都是We，这样别人读起来非常不专业，何不灵活运用，把主语放在后面呢，可以用下倒装语句
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这种信是差的， 感觉很差，不管英语怎么好，这样的开发信太差。
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果断删除之，废话太多了，精简是关键
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写的很真诚，但是内容太长了，很少有客户会有耐心看的，点到即止就行了。。
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下面我觉得都是多余的。
Industrial Uses in Mainland China, we are reputed for high quality products and good service among our customers.
We are ISO 9001&TS16949 certified, and all the production follow strict quality control process. We know you are a professional company too, so we'd like to contact you and your esteemed company. We are a serious, reliable and good quality manufacturer.
Thanks for your valuable time to read this letter and we appreciate for your kind attention. We are looking forward to establishing a long-term & mutual beneficial partnership with you in the near future. If you have any inquiries, we will be glad to provide further details upon request每个人都有自己的开发特色， 可能我的适合我自己吧，只供LZ 参考。
[ 本帖最后由 Suka 于 2012-3-9 12:32 编辑 ]
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