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前不久发了开发信给老外，没有回，直接电话过去，然后就回复了，如下Dear XXX,
Thank you for your e-mail.
Yes we received everything and checked it.
At this moment we do not conduct any purchases on such products.
这话说不采购，是不是间接说明没有合作的机会了，后面我又跟了一封过去。要是你们的话 会如何回复呢？
Dear XXX,
It's so glad to received your e-mail, it's no matter, we are a professional manufactor in garden tools, other products has XXX、XXX and so on. Not long ago we construction a new website,any products information you can looking for it. www.zlgtl.com . We glad to help you do anyting if you need .
In the futrue hope you can give us a opportunity to coopration with you !
Many tks !
不知道怎么写的如何，请各位大侠赐教。
不知道老外是真的没有采购还是不想和我合作，请拍砖竞答。
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看了你们给的批复我更加灰心了，原来我还差的很远呢。我语法不好，怎么练怎么练。。。。。
[ 本帖最后由 jieren 于 2012-10-5 11:48 编辑 ]
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客户的邮件已经明确表示现在没有采购的意愿，回复表示感谢并保持联系即可，过多的推销会招来客户的反感。
另外，英文的拼写尽量要规范，否则给客户不专业的感觉。比如“In the futrue hope you can give us a opportunity to
coopration with you !”
coopration应该用动词cooperate 。
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感觉错误多
It's so glad to received your e-mail-----so glad to receive your email
it's no matter. 感觉多余，而且没这个说法吧， it doesn't matter
manufactor ---manufactory / manufacturer
we construction a new website------we construct/ bulid a new website
any products information you can looking for it 这话有点多余
We glad to help you do anyting if you need .-----We are glad to help you do anyting if you need
改为 If you need help ,please contact me
In the futrue---in the future
a opportunity ---an opportunity
coopration with you --cooprate with you
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不知道是失误还是英语水平不够，LZ再多多练习吧
老外看到你这封邮件，估计更加心灰意冷
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能留个企鹅吗，加你好友，
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是我的话，就这样些， Thanks for your kind response. Let's keep in touch. 就够了，仅作参考
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lz英文太烂了
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楼主英语写的时候，稍微加把力，多看看。有的老外写的比你还烂，主要能让老外看得懂就行了
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看到 we construction a new website我真得忍不住笑了
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能看懂就可以，也许客户是英国郊区的
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如果楼主客户是爪洼岛的，这样写是对的，如果你写对的反而客户看不懂
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many thanks for your reply, it's my job to help you, keep in touch, thanks ..
how about this reply??
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这个不敢恭维...
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你的回复邮件
Dear XXX,
It's so glad to received your e-mail, it's no matter, we are a professional manufactor in garden tools, other products has XXX、XXX and so on. Not long ago we construction a new website,any products information you can looking for it. www.tabletpccheapprice.com . We glad to help you do anyting if you need .
In the futrue hope you can give us a opportunity to coopration with you !
Many tks !
we construction a new website 这句话不行 你懂的
In the futrue---in the future
a opportunity ---an opportunity
coopration with you --cooprate with you
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应该发送个产品目录的
这个非常非常关键 比那个什么网站还好使！
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