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加拿大外贸

Tourchasing Manager

Dear Sir/Madam,
It is my fortune to know your company,and I write to you to seek the possibility of establishing business relationships.

In order to further developing of our business,we are looking for powerful and long-term business partners,clients,agents worldwidely,the best price,
high-quality of products as well as high-level of service you would receive from our cooperation.

Zhejiang Daming Glass Co,.Ltd is a large-scaled and comprehensive glass producing & processing enterprise, with high-tech glass production as
its own feature.which cover an area of 550Mu and Registered Capital of 268million yuan.

Daming products and business mainly cover four fields as below:
Glass Mirror Products:
      1. High-Class Silver Mirror
      2. High-Class Aluminum Mirror
      3. Copper& Lead Free Mirror
    Available Thickness:1.1-10mm        Maximum Size:2440X3660mm
    Equipment: 3 Silver Mirror Lines(1 BOVONE brand for copper free mirror);4 Aluminum Mirror Lines(vacuum magnetron sputtering tech)
    Material:quality float glass with double coated paint(Fenzi)
    Processing:cut size and various shapes available
                     matt-C edge,Flat/Pencil polish edge,bevelling edge
                     safety film backing:Cat I or Cat II
   Stock size:3mm,4mm,5mm,6mm 1830X2440mm,1220X2440mm,2134X3050mm,2134X3300,2134X3660mm,1500X2000mm
   Packing:paper interleave pieces,wooden crates with Iron belts
   Output:Silver mirror 15million Sqm/Y    Aluminum Mirror: 25million Sqm/Y
   Quality standard:CE KS 3C ect.

Deep-processing Glass Products:
      1. Tempered Glass
      2. Laminated Glass
      3. Insulating Glass
      4. processing including of glass cutting,grinding,washing,silkscreen printing,roller coating,drilling ect
    Well-known customer:such as IKEA,BOSCH-SIEMENS and so on.

New Energy Glass:
1. Solar Power Mirror-Key component of CSP heliostats
2. TCO/AZO Coating Glass
3. AR Glass
4. Low-E Glass

Glass Sheet:(under construction,estimate running in Nov 2011))
1. Low Iron Patterned Glass   
2. Ultra Clear Float Glass/Float Glass   
  Capacity:600T/D+700T/D

Please have a visit to our company web www.damingglass.com for more information.

Looking forward to receiving from you soon.

Best Regards,
Marco Dai
Zhejiang Daming Glass Co,.Ltd
Tel:0086-573-85623518
Fax:0086-573-85810522
Mobile:137-38275419
E-Mail&Msn:[email protected]
Skype:zjdmglass
www.damingglass.com

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这么长的信,我想一般人是没有耐心看下去的

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起码信面整洁、流程清晰;

但是确实太长了,老外一天要收很多公司的邮件,建议你简洁明了点。

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好长。。要简单扼要

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一般是3句话吧!这个我看都不会看!

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写得好......如果是作文的话,会很高分!!!

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太长了,一看快晕倒。
最好先写一些优势的东西,有吸引力的,可以让客户有问题可以问的,简短一点,如果有回应,再弄具体的。

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太长了,其他的不说,一般难得看的

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Have a good day, glad to hear you are interest in xxxx product,we are ****COMPANY,our mainly product is ****,This is ***,  from now on, for any product information, you may directly contact with me
Wish you a prosperous business
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太长了,2-3句话就够了!!重写,这个没几个人人会看的。

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行文很流畅,内容也很丰富。

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看完于是我崩溃了。。。
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