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有个客户群发邮件说要来参展,我想约他见面,但不知这样写行不行:Dear XX
Glad to hear that you are going to visit lighting exhibition on 9-12 Jun, Our booth No is E00, in LED exhibition hall. Would you kindly advise which products you are most interested in that I can arrange sample for you. May I have your contact way In china?
Eager to meet you soon!
感觉很不顺,请高手赐教!
[ 本帖最后由 Frank.Brown 于 2010-7-22 11:05 编辑 ]
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这样挺好的呀。。。。
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Dear sirs,
Gllad to hear from u.
we also have decided to see you in exhibition on 9-12th,Jun.Now,can you tell me your contact details in exhibition?maybe
we would meet there.
tks
looking forward to your early reply.
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LZ很棒了啊，这样还嫌不好了呀，您自己就是高手咯
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我是高手的话,就是一个不出单的高手
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写的还可以啊。
QUOTE:LETTER OF INVITATION，广交会邀请函，展会邀请函
LETTER OF INVITATION
Dear Sirs/Madam:
We hereby sincerely invite you and your company representatives to visit our booth at The Continental Exhibition Center from April 15th to 20th 2006.
We’re one of the manufacturers specialized in sanitaryware, concluding one & two piece toilet, wash basin, cabinet basin, pedestal basin, bidet, urinal, counter basin , decorated ceramics and so on. Our new models offer superb design and their new features give them distinct advantages over similar products from other manufacturers.
It would be a great pleasure to meet you at the exhibition.We expect to establish long-term business relations with your company in future.
http://download.shanghai.com/search/result/?searchid=447
FYI
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Glad to hear that you are going to visit lighting exhibition on 9-12 Jun, Our booth No is E00, in LED exhibition hall.
Would you kindly advise which products you are most interested in that I can arrange sample for your visiting. It would be highly appreciated if you can give me your contact way in China.
修改了一下,会不会更好呢
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你懂我懂，简单点不浪费他时间就是最好的了
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我觉得还OK
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偶觉得 从客户的角度 出发。如果楼主的句子能短一点，简单明了 最好 我是这么的认为
楼主堪称高手
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其实楼主自己的英文都很好啊，不过，10楼的说法都很有道理~~可再缩短下。
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谢谢大家的建议:
Nice day to you!
Glad to hear that you are going to visit lighting exhibition on 9-12 Jun, Our booth No is B00, in LED exhibition hall. May I have your contact No in China? Hoping that we can make an appointment during your trip.
Eager to meet you soon!
我这样发出去了,从邮件中得天客户应该是要面板灯.所以我不问了.
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我现在终于知道没文化是多么可怕的事情。
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我也这么觉得
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这ID，你不说，还真没人会误会
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