加拿大外贸
我们现在新研发了四、五款新产品，是为十月份展览会准备的。量产在九月份，现阶段在试产。正如Jake所说，我们生产部门现在非常忙，您的订单准备下多少？我们现在有单要做，这样可以一下货，早一点采购，以保证交期。
附件是最近的产品目录，任何疑问，请联系我。
We have several new styles for the fair in Oct.. We are going to be mass produce in Sep.. Now, we are trial-produce it.
As Nino mentioned, our manufacture Dept. is very busy now. How many will you place the order for us? Another customer also ordered MT-818. If you can place order now, we could purchase the material together, then we can guarantee the delivery time.
Update catalogue attached, any question please email or call me.Thanks!
我写的邮件觉得没什么信心，希望能得到大家的帮助！ 谢谢！
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i think it is ok.
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1. Mass production is on Sep and we are just on a trial period now.
2. What's the qty（直接问客人数量有多少，直接，明了。你翻译的意思是你要下几个订单，和要表达的意思不同）
3. Updated 表示最近的，更新了的。Update是动词，不能用在这里。
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We have several new styles for the fair in Oct.. Our customers gave a highly appreciation to them and some of them had placed the trial order. So we are confident and glad to introduce them to you.
As Nino mentioned, our manufacture Dept is very busy now. How many will you place the order for us? Other customers also ordered MT-818. If you can place order now, we could purchase the raw material together, then we can guarantee the delivery time.
Updated catalogue is attached, any question please email or call me.Thanks!
供参考。。。
嘴角上扬的弧度最美。
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非常感谢！
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We have developed 4 to 5 new styles for Oct fair. It's now in trial production,a nd will be in mass production in Sep.
As Jake mentioned, our production is very busy. May i know the quantity for your order? we are now in production for another customer. We can prepare materials in advance so as to guarantee the delivery.
Attached is the updated Product Catalogue. Any question pls feel free to contact me.
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We have developed several new styles for the coming fair in Oct.It's now trial-produced and will make bulk procuctionin in Sep.
As Nino mentioned, our manufacture Dept. is very busy now. Would you pls advise the quantity?If you can place the order now we can arrange to purshase the material to guarantee an earlier delivery time.
Pls find attached our latest catalog, fell free to ask me if you have any concerns,Thanks!
我个人觉得不要把你另一个客户也在做这个单子的事说出来，会比较好
仅供参考
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邮件信息太多, 越短越好, 除非你是他的很重要客户, 不然他忙的没时间看
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只要写的够简洁 明了 就ok了 ！
没有必要非要一个模板来写邮件！
有自己的个性的邮件是做好的！
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你这是开发信吗？我觉得还有点长了。。。嘿嘿，虽然我写不出来，但如果我是收件人，我不会喜欢这封邮件的。你说要他赶紧下单你们好买材料生产实际有点给他们下通牒的感觉。
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