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TASK 1 由于占的分值小,另外文体相对比较简单,字数也少,往往不被广大考生们重视,仅仅是考前看看模板然后就上考场了。我想说,这样是不对滴。小作文 TASK 1 必须得到足够的重视原因如下: 1. 虽然小作文占得分值小,但是也毕竟占全部作文分的1/3.设想如果小作文写到8分的水平,大作文即使只有5.5分的水平,8÷3+5.5x2÷3=(8+11)÷3=19÷3=6.3333333…≈6.5. 小作文如果写的比较好,对于整体分数还是有比较大的拉动作用的。 2. 小作文由于字数少,形式比较可控,所以相对大作文来说比较容易短期提高。由于每个人都存在个体差异,所以经验什么的我就不赘述了,适合他的不一定适合她. 我在此列出一些小作文中各种类型图可以用到的词、短语、句型一类的,最后给出我自己的模板。 以下内容都是我从《十天》,《8分万能作文》和《剑桥系列》的范文中总结出来的可以借鉴的句子及短语,由于都是我的个人总结摘录,可能有些乱,大家将就看吧,希望对有所帮助
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寒月悲笳,万里西风瀚海沙;碧血丹心,关河渺茫梦征尘。 超赞 赏 反馈:smy1018 狗狗凡Moderator 0$(VIP 0) 29,2292011-11-28#2 回复: 雅思小作文TASK 1 实用词句列举●介绍图表用到的句式● the data mentioned/listed/recorded/presented in the bar chart/graph/diagram/table gives a breakdown of ... ... shows data about ... while ... describes information about ... the bar chart clearly shows that ... as shown in the .../according to the .../as can be seen from the ... that.../we can see from the ... that ... therefore,it can be clearly seen from the chart that ...●描述"时期"的短语● throughout the period during the entire period in the period between … and … over the thirty-year period over the next decade within the same period over/in the following/next 2 days at the present time in around 19xx●描述"大约"&"预测"的词● almost / approximately / estimated / about / around / roughly / more or less / nearly / just over / just under expect / predict ●描述变化速度的词● sharp / dramatic / drastic / rapid / precipitous / steep 后面可加--ly,用作副词 gradual / steady / gentle / slow 后面可加--ly,用作副词●描述幅度的词● marked / substantial / significant modest / moderate / slight●描述"最高"&"最低"● peak at / reach the highest point at bottom out at / reach the bottom at the subject for which the highest score was recorded was at ...●描述上升趋势的词句● go up / rise /grow / increase / ascend / jump / surge / shoot up / soar a staggering x% increase/decrease in … has been recorded the most noteworthy increase was recorded rise in varying degrees within the same period by 19xx,the figure increased to xx and xx in 20xx a gradual increase/decrease in … with age ... have undergone rapid growth surges in ... the increase in ... did occur the growth rate is moderate stand at a staggering x%●描述下降趋势的词句● decline / fall / drop / sink / dip / decrease / descend / plummet / plunge there was a massive drop in … sector from x% in 1960 all the way down to x% in 2000 In 19xx,about xx men were smoking,and this number dropped gradually to xx by 1974 and continued to decrease until ... made a steady decrease from 1985 began to decline and continued on this downward turn until 20xx. declined by x% to x% every decade experienced a downward tendency●描述变化趋势的词句● level off at / stablized at during the first few ... of … ,the number of … remained steady,followed by a slight decrease before the numbers rose dramatically between xx and xx. reached a peak xx,fluctuating slightly until …,and then fell sharply over the following 2 days. there was a slight increase up to xx when … dropped steadily and finally reached their lowest point at xx. ... remained stable at the level over the next decade whereas ...●用来表示"部分"的短语●more than half of … the entire body of … the bulk of ... a considerable amount of ... a small portion of ... the majority of/the minority of ...●用来表示"占"的词● make up/occupy/comprise / account for / represent / claim be comprised of = consist of = constitute●范文中的一些句子● is predominantly made up of … with only a small quantity of … ** up/taking up the remainder a staggering x% of all water used in … is for … ,on the other hand,far outweighs the other … in its use of water with x% being the figure recorded. additionally,xx in … claims by far the highest percentage of water use out of the three countries listed,at x%. 35% of women in China complete their elementary education and only 10% went on to university,besides which,a mere 5% of women actually complete their university studies. however,the situation in … changed dramatically,in which … by x%,x% of … received an education beyond elementary level. with China producing 218 followed by Japan's 124,the U.S. follows closely behind Japan at 116 and Russia and Germany are ** somewhat lesser contribution to steel production at 72 and 47 respectively.●实用句式● 主动. 例: The graph shows ... / the figure for ... grows from ... to ... / the proportion of ... will continue to increase 被动. 例: the percentage is expected to be ... / a dramatic rise is predicted ... 从句. 例: it indicates that ... / it is thought that ...
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寒月悲笳,万里西风瀚海沙;碧血丹心,关河渺茫梦征尘。 超赞 赏 狗狗凡Moderator 0$(VIP 0) 29,2292011-11-28#3 回复: 雅思小作文TASK 1 实用词句列举◆饼/线/柱 图模板◆The information presented in the process graph shows ... / The line graph illustrates changes in ... / The graphic information presented in the first bar chart reflects trends related to the changes in ... / The bar chart indicates data about ...According to the first diagram... / It can be clearly seen from the first chart that the number of ... / As shown in the graph ... / Consistent with the information shown in the first chart,the number of ...It can be clearly seen from the second diagram that ... / According to the second chart ... Overall,... / To conclude,...◆流程图◆●模板1●The graphic information represented in the diagram/process chart reflects how ...To begin the ... process,first of all ...In the next stage,...Following this,in the next stage,...Finally,as in the example provided in the diagram shows,...Overall,this diagram conveys common stages in the ... process,from the preliminary stage of ... all the way to ...,which is the last stage in ... before ...●模板2●After the initial stage of ...,a ... usually follows ...This can be transformed into the next stage,which is ... At this point,... Then arrive at the ... stage of ...After ...,xx 形成 in the subsequent stage. This in turn goes through to the final ...After everything has been checked through carefully,... reaches the final ... stage.==========================华丽丽的分割线===============================写小作文时,一定要注意时态。图表作文,开头介绍段一定是一般现在时.大部分的图表中的数据都是过去的,所以写的时候,一定要注意动词的时态。连词必不可少,而且要变化丰富。每一个句子开头,甚至句子中间,变化趋势中间的关联词,都比不可少,而且要富有变化,不能一直and,then,到头。分阶段描述,不用面面俱到,写出关键的: 起始,终止,最大值,最小值,交点,特殊的变化. 引用具体数字作为变化的依据,有时直接描写趋势,具体数字用括号标出.句式多变,多运用定语从句和同位语作为修饰名词相同意思的多替换写的有些乱=_=不过内容还是很精华滴,希望能对烤鸭们有所帮助。有什么问题欢迎筒子们踊跃提问,我会尽我所能回答P.S. 练习作文的时候,最好打印出来答题卡,写在专门的作文纸上,这样比较好控制字数,也算是提前感受一下考试答题卡的格式
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