加拿大华人论坛 加拿大留学移民写给使馆的信,请英语好的xdjm挑错指正!

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2月底收到体检表,但因为怀孕不能体检,因此给使馆写一封说明信,请求延期体检.请各位对英文信的错误提出意见.谢谢了!Dear Officer[FONT=宋体]，[/FONT]Thank you for taking time to read this letter. My name is xxx. I am educated and skilled applicant for permanent resident in Canada. I have received a letter issued on Feb. 14, 2007 from immigration office in Hong Kong. It requested me and my husband to establish the medical examination within 45 days. But I can’t establish the medical examination now cause of my pregnancy for 10 weeks. Would you please allow me and my husband to delay our medical examination until my baby is born on the end of this September? Your advice for me would be gratefully appreciated. There is a notary of gestation certificate and a copy of medical examination report for gestation issued by xxxx hospital in Beijing attached to the letter.My application information is below.File number:Surname:Given name: Date of birth: Telephone number: Address: Email: Again, thank you for your time and patience.Yours sincerely,

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two suggestion:1. change "establish" to "take"2. "on the end of this Sep" should be " in the end of this September"

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FN: 2006-10-16等待Stage two... 赏 2007-03-14#3 S 15 $0.00 谢谢熊猫猪的建议!by the way,你的名字好有趣啊,和我家三口很吻合.我老公外号是"熊熊",我外号"猫猫",我的宝宝是"猪猪".握个手!

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可以把gratefully 换成highly；issued 可以换成sentcause of 可以换成due todelay our medical examination 可以换成delay the schedule of medical examination.Thank you for taking time to read this letter.可以换成Thanks for your time in reading this letter.仅供参考！其实你写的已经很明白了，只不过不是很美语化。vo能明白就ok了。

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不好意思，忘了一点，补充一下delay our medical examination 可以换成postpone the schedule of medical .Delay 在英文中不是褒义词！

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Dear Officer，Thank you for taking your time to read this letter. My name is xxx. I am a Federal skilled worker applicants for permanent resident to Canada. I received my medical Examination form on Feb. 14, 2007 from immigration Canada in Hong Kong. It requested me and my husband to take the medical examination within 45 days. But I can not take the medical examination now because I am in my 10th weeks of pregnancy. Would you please allow me and my husband to postpone our medical examination until my baby is born at the end of this September of 2007? Your advice to us will be gratefully appreciated. There is a notary of gestation certificate and a copy of medical examination report for gestation issued by xxxx hospital in Beijing attached to the letter.My application information is below.File number:Surname:Given name: Date of birth: Telephone number: Address: Email: Again, thank you for your time and patience.Yours sincerely,我稍微的改了一下你的信，比告诉你改哪里简单多了。参考一下吧

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permanent resident CT permanent residence

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真是非常感谢大家!!!大家给我的修改意见都非常好,非常有用!再次感谢!!

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sherryw 说:真是非常感谢大家!!!大家给我的修改意见都非常好,非常有用!再次感谢!!点击展开...叫ELI8帮忙,她呀司3个7,一个8

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