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信的内容如下： Dear visa officer:[FONT='宋体'][/FONT][FONT='宋体'][/FONT] This is a letter from [FONT='宋体']*****[/FONT] who is applying for permanent residence in Canada. On 16th August,I submit my application for immigration and remittances to your office. Inquiries through the post office last month, I noticed that my money has been taken out. But two month has been past, I still have not received any information from your office.[FONT='宋体'][/FONT] Therefore I am writing to inquire on the status of my application, and whether you have gived my FN. My EMS number is [FONT='宋体']**********[/FONT],and my Number of remittances is [FONT='宋体']*********[/FONT].the date of my birth is [FONT='宋体']*****[/FONT]. My Phone number is [FONT='宋体']***********[/FONT].Thank youSincerely yours[FONT='宋体']***********[/FONT]. 有不妥的地方，高手们帮俺改改哈，先谢啦~~~
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行坐沙发，等高手~~~
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行没人理俺，再项
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行Don't be nagged,nobody will take care of your email if so.I have a successful inquiry on my own FN,hopefully,it will give you any help in consulting your case.就不评价你的英语了,但下面是我成功询问的邮件,只问了一次就回复了,希望对你有用,别忘了+++Dear Madam/ Sir, Would you please go through my pending FN issurance as below: 1)Applicant name: 2)Application for permanent residence: Federal Skilled worker class3)Date of Birth: 4)Postal date: My postal address
New!!)Thanks for your help, All the best,***(My name)评论
回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行Don't be nagged,nobody will take care of your email if so. I have a successful inquiry on my own FN,hopefully,it will give you any help in consulting your case. 就不评价你的英语了,但下面是我成功询问的邮件,只问了一次就回复了,希望对你有用,别忘了+++ Dear Madam/ Sir, Would you please go through my pending FN issurance as below: 1)Applicant name: 2)Application for permanent residence: Federal Skilled worker class3)Date of Birth: 4)Postal date: My postal address
New!!) Thanks for your help, All the best, ***(My name)点击展开... 评价下也无仿哈，这信是俺主申请弄滴，你评价下也好知道问题出在哪里嘛~~~ 谢谢你的模板哈~~评论
回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行信的内容如下： ... This is a letter from [FONT=宋体]*****[/FONT] who is applying for permanent residence in Canada. On 16th August,I submit my application for immigration and remittances to your office. Inquiries through the post office last month, I noticed that my money has been taken out. But two month has been past, I still have not received any information from your office....点击展开...仅就文本错误的地方做一评价：submit的过去式是submitted；submit remittance搭配有问题，拟改为make remittance；inquire可做及物动词，句中拟改为Inquiring（去掉through）；has改为had；taken out改为withdrawn较好；still改为yet较好。 ...第二段也有问题，不再赘述。不是打击楼主积极性，实在是不知道老外看了这样的信会作何感想？ 稍改一下,文法和句法会更佳一些。比如最后一句改为：With two months past, I haven't yet heard from you. Therefore with great anxiety I am writing to you to inquire how's my application status, and whether my FN has been sent out. ... 献丑了showing up with a bit of complacency，不妥之处请见谅
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行英语真好啊，就按你的意见修改后再发~~~~ 仅就文本错误的地方做一评价：submit的过去式是submitted；submit remittance搭配有问题，拟改为make remittance；inquire可做及物动词，句中拟改为Inquiring（去掉through）；has改为had；taken out改为withdrawn较好；still改为yet较好。 ...第二段也有问题，不再赘述。不是打击楼主积极性，实在是不知道老外看了这样的信会作何感想？ 稍改一下,文法和句法会更佳一些。比如最后一句改为：With two months past, I haven't yet heard from you. Therefore with great anxiety I am writing to you to inquire how's my application status, and whether my FN has been sent out. ... 献丑了showing up with a bit of complacency，不妥之处请见谅点击展开...
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行6#分析非常好,LZ的主申请有一定的基础,但语法和英语习惯要注意.LZ怎么没给我加分啊.咨询别人要注意礼仪在先,首尾都要有礼貌.标注的地方都值得商榷.Dear visa officer:This is a letter from ***** who is applying for permanent residence in Canada. On 16th August,I submit my application for immigration and remittances to your office. Inquiries through the post office last month, I noticed that my money has been taken out. But two month has been past, I still have not received any information from your office.Therefore I am writing to inquire on the status of my application, and whether you have gived my FN. My EMS number is **********,and my Number of remittances is *********.the date of my birth is *****. My Phone number is ***********.Thank youSincerely yours
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行6#已经指出的部分不在重复了.请LZ不要写这样的邮件去问,我列举的格式也是参照前面TZ给的,你如果坚持那样写受理肯定是受理,但可能要做冷板凳了.
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行6#已经指出的部分不在重复了.请LZ不要写这样的邮件去问,我列举的格式也是参照前面TZ给的,你如果坚持那样写受理肯定是受理,但可能要做冷板凳了.点击展开...是啊，USBU说的没错，我只是就文本议论了一下，具体操作上，CACTUS还是按USBU说的去做。
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行仅就文本错误的地方做一评价：submit的过去式是submitted；submit remittance搭配有问题，拟改为make remittance；inquire可做及物动词，句中拟改为Inquiring（去掉through）；has改为had；taken out改为withdrawn较好；still改为yet较好。 ...第二段也有问题，不再赘述。不是打击楼主积极性，实在是不知道老外看了这样的信会作何感想？ 稍改一下,文法和句法会更佳一些。比如最后一句改为：With two months past, I haven't yet heard from you. Therefore with great anxiety I am writing to you to inquire how's my application status, and whether my FN has been sent out. ... 献丑了showing up with a bit of complacency，不妥之处请见谅点击展开... Better description, good english!
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10年9月14日签，11月24日商签， 2011年2月18日面，2012年7月13日预提名，11月8日正式提名，2013年1月29日FN，8月2日IP,8月26日ME, 9月9日MER，10月29号补料，2014年1月7号PL,1月28日DM2月7日毕业,315登陆！Better description, good english!点击展开... 嘿嘿，俺家主申在俺发这个贴子之前，昨天晚上悄悄地发给使馆了。。俺本想来让筒子们改一改再重发的，谁知道，刚使馆已经回复了，俺主申的英语，难为VO们了，回复的内容如下： Dear AAAAAA, We have resent your acknowledgement letter containing your file number to the mailing address provided on file today. Yours sincerely,Visa and Immigration SectionCanadian Embassy, Beijing19 Dongzhimenwai Dajie, Chaoyang DistrictBeijing, 100600, People's Republic of ChinaWeb site: www.beijing.gc.caEmail: [email protected] & Disclaimer: By supplying your email address (in your enquiry or previously in your application), you are initiating an email communication with CIC, and CIC is thereby authorized to use the email address provided by you for communication with you including the transmission of personal information on your file/case. When you supply your email address to CIC, it is also understood that you are aware that this channel may not be a secure channel. CIC is not liable for the disclosure of personal information to a third party where CIC has taken reasonable means to ensure the identity of the party. CIC is also not liable for the misuse of this information by a third party.
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行6#分析非常好,LZ的主申请有一定的基础,但语法和英语习惯要注意.LZ怎么没给我加分啊.咨询别人要注意礼仪在先,首尾都要有礼貌.标注的地方都值得商榷.Dear visa officer: This is a letter from ***** who is applying for permanent residence in Canada. On 16th August,I submit my application for immigration and remittances to your office. Inquiries through the post office last month, I noticed that my money has been taken out. But two month has been past, I still have not received any information from your office. Therefore I am writing to inquire on the status of my application, and whether you have gived my FN. My EMS number is **********,and my Number of remittances is *********.the date of my birth is *****. My Phone number is ***********. Thank you Sincerely yours点击展开...加过分分了吧？显示好象加上了呀~~~~
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行仅就文本错误的地方做一评价：submit的过去式是submitted；submit remittance搭配有问题，拟改为make remittance；inquire可做及物动词，句中拟改为Inquiring（去掉through）；has改为had；taken out改为withdrawn较好；still改为yet较好。 ...第二段也有问题，不再赘述。不是打击楼主积极性，实在是不知道老外看了这样的信会作何感想？ 稍改一下,文法和句法会更佳一些。比如最后一句改为：With two months past, I haven't yet heard from you. Therefore with great anxiety I am writing to you to inquire how's my application status, and whether my FN has been sent out. ... 献丑了showing up with a bit of complacency，不妥之处请见谅点击展开... 俺主申刚在Q里跟我说，这筒子的英语水真高啊，有些地方他确实都忘了怎么用了，你一提，他才想起来了。。。呵呵。。
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行hanson, how is your ys going?at least, you are good at writing,right?how long will it take us to prepare for such test?3months or above?I mean, it's for a guy whose english is not pretty weak.
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行hanson, how is your ys going?at least, you are good at writing,right?how long will it take us to prepare for such test?3months or above?I mean, it's for a guy whose english is not pretty weak.点击展开...为什么说在给你加声望之前，得先给别人加呢~~~~不解哦~~
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回复: 北京的FN现在还没来，想发邮件问一下，高手过来看看俺写的信行不行FN到了~~~~10月23号签发的，10月24日北京寄出，今天收到了。。。。签发的日期正是俺发信后的那天。难道是因为俺说FN没收到，VO给重新签发的？要不然俺8月份递的表，为何FN发的这么迟呢？不管怎么说，总算到了~~~~~`
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