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我女儿的作业, 等我的批示呢. 我还真不知如何批示呢. 请教了. 保证给所有的批示TZ加声望! Sea LandWater, water, water, everywhere water.Over me, under me, all around me.I swim with others, circling their bodies.I swim with others, racing toward land.Until sunrise, until sunset, until another day is coming. This is where we live,This is where we belong to.As time passes,I can sense from head to tail, Our water is darkening, corrupting, and poisoning. Sky is blue, grass is green.We enjoy sunshine; the natural beauty. I dream of all this wonderfulness surrounding me.This is our home: clear, fair; it is adorable.It is here for me forever.Land, land, land, evergreen land.In front of me, at back of me, all around me. I laugh, I cheer, I live with happiness.I cry, I regret, I learn from experience.My precious time.This is where we breathe,This is where we enjoy our lives.Day by day, I can feel from hands to feet,Our land is shadowing, disrupting, and dying. We see, we listen, we taste, we smell,We feel this world.This is our home no matter what,After all it will be harmonious, peaceful, and fresh. It will be a perfect home forever.
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回复: 请教高手和低手, 修改作业.it's all literal things...and I'm a math geek who doesn't care aboot it at all...帮顶~
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辛苦十几年，你也不过是红警里500块一个的工程师，一条狗咬死一片的那种。。。CBC Radio 2 ClassicalMy RSS Feeds List回复: 请教高手和低手, 修改作业.until another day comes红字是什么， 这作业是什么啊？评论
Nice to meet you.How are you?I'm fine.Thank you.And you?I'm fine ,too.我女儿的作业, 等我的批示呢. 我还真不知如何批示呢. 请教了. 保证给所有的批示TZ加声望! Sea LandWater, water, water, everywhere water.Over me, under me, all around me.I swim with others, circling their bodies.I swim with others, racing toward land.Until sunrise, until sunset, until another day (is coming) comes. This is where we live,This is where we belong (to).As time passes,I can sense from head to tail, Our water is darkening, corrupting, and poisoning. Sky is blue, grass is green.We enjoy sunshine; the natural beauty. I dream of all this wonderfulness surrounding me.This is our home: clear, fair; it is adorable.It is here for me forever.Land, land, land, evergreen land.In front of me, (at back of) behind me, all around me. I laugh, I cheer, I live with happiness.I cry, I regret, I learn from experience.My precious time.This is where we breathe,This is where we enjoy our lives.Day by day, I can feel from hands to feet,Our land is shadowing, disrupting, and dying. We see, we listen, we taste, we smell,We feel this world.This is our home no matter what,After all it will be harmonious, peaceful, and fresh. It will be a perfect home forever.点击展开...没有太多错误，而且不过因为是诗，所以怎么写都可以的。
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回复: 请教高手和低手, 修改作业.until another day comes 红字是什么， 这作业是什么啊？点击展开...红字是我认为不妥的地方, 这作业是布置的一首POEM. help pls.
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回复: 请教高手和低手, 修改作业.帮顶下，闪吧！
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。。。回复: 请教高手和低手, 修改作业.厉害，几年级啊。
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回复: 请教高手和低手, 修改作业.没有太多错误，而且不过因为是诗，所以怎么写都可以的。点击展开...THANK. 加声望了.
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回复: 请教高手和低手, 修改作业.厉害，几年级啊。点击展开...12年级, 还需要TUTOR呢, 不算厉害的. ANYWY, THANKS FOR ENCOURAGING.
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回复: 请教高手和低手, 修改作业.I don't think it is "head to tail" it is Chinglish, I guess it shall be "head to toe"
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回复: 请教高手和低手, 修改作业.看看有没有语法错误就行了，诗嘛。会扯即可
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回复: 请教高手和低手, 修改作业.I don't think it is "head to tail" it is Chinglish, I guess it shall be "head to toe"点击展开...THANKS, CHINGLISH IS A HEADACH IN FACT." HEAD TO TAIL" IMPLICATE THE FISH IN THE SECOND SECTIONS, HOWEVER, GOOD SUGGESTION TO MAKE REVISEMENT FROM " HEAD TO FEET" TO "HEAD TO TOE" IN THE LAST SECOND SECTION. THE WHOLE POEM IS SUPPOSED TO DESCRIBE A ECO-CONCERN WHILE A FISH EVLOVE TO HUMAN. 说实在的, 真没看出主题来, 尤其是海生物进化成人类上岸了(环境改善后, 我女儿解释的). 一个字: 晕!
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回复: 请教高手和低手, 修改作业.看看有没有语法错误就行了，诗嘛。会扯即可点击展开...100%
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