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刚入行，什么事情都得小心翼翼的。和客人在洽谈样品的事，希望高手能指点下我的邮件，我觉得自己语法上没什么错误，但是语气有点生硬，让人觉得不太想合作的感觉，
大虾们，靠你们了！
谢谢！
Dear XXX
Good day!This is XX from XXXXXX in China.
As what we had discussed in Aliwangwang,we welcom OEM service.We will charge you USD 22 for the sample.And we only accrpt the payment of t-t and western unino.Once you place an order,the USD 22 will be returned back to you.And we need about one week to make the sampleThe delivery time we can discuss in the next few mails,and we promise you,once the sample is ready,we will send it to without any delay.
best regards,
XXXXX
[ 本帖最后由 yuleyoung 于 2010-4-10 23:01 编辑 ]
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阿里旺旺？学名应该是trademanager吧？
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一言惊醒梦中人！3q
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As we have discussed in trademaneger,the OEM are welcome in our company.We will get the samply ready within a week after the samply payment by T/T or Westen Union.and the charge is USD22. Samply charge can be returned to you after formal order.
希望有更好的回帖
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accrpt 是不是写错了？
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阿里旺旺就用汉语拼音吧，我看好多地方都是的，用学名人家不一定看得懂。还有就是你用的全是简单句，适当的时候用用复合句。
写的的确很生硬~~~~~~不过以后看多了就会好的。
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could you please help me?
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Dear XXX
Good day!This is XX from XXXXXX in China.
As we had talked over the trademanager,we mainly deal with OEM service(个人见解).For the
payment terms of the sample, we would prefer T/T or Westunion. The sample fees are 22 USD,
and we will return the money after the confirmation of your order. One more thing,We may
need one week to prepare the sample, and I will tell you the delivery time ASAP after finishing it.
Please rest assured。
仅供参考
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厉害！自卑ing。。。。。。。。。
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LZ 你太 CUTE 了
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Dearxx
Good day.
I am pleased to inform you that we are in the position to satisfy with your requirement of OEM through the trademanager we talked last time.In the meanwhile,i am afraid the sample and freight cost have to on your account because we send so many samples every day, but once we receive your order ,the money will be returned to you.we would be grateful for your understanding.herewith the sample will be dispatched within 7days after we receive your remittance by t/t or WU according to our usual practice.Your cooperation will be appreciated!........................FOR YOUR REFERENCE
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晕....钱没有说
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