加拿大外贸
很久没有看书了,最近去买了几本书,看到一本<美丽英文>,顺手拿起来翻几页,仿佛被洗礼了一般.所以打算每天打一点上来,可能是打中文,要求大家翻成英文;可能是英文,让大家翻成中文.
这本<美丽英文>主要是哲理方面,由一个故事,说一个道理,一种精髓.
所以我希望大家用心翻译,用心感知.
我会一直持续下去,参加完全凭自愿.没有B奖励.
ATT:
1-这是纯翻译交流,要灌水以及回复与本贴无关的内容,若经发现,直接删除不另行通知.
2-每期我会把原文翻译给打上来,供大家借鉴或推敲.
3-希望大家不要去网上搜索原文翻译,那样就失去了意义,我也不必一个字一个字打出来了.
4-没有福B奖励,是因为这本身就是一种交流与学习,不是活动.希望大家能意会.
目录
第一篇
http://bbs.shanghai.com/viewthread.php?tid=1708038&page=2&fromuid=373858#pid23087972
http://bbs.shanghai.com/viewthread.php?tid=1708038&page=3&fromuid=373858#pid23123922
http://bbs.shanghai.com/viewthread.php?tid=1708038&page=4&fromuid=373858#pid23236762
第二篇
http://bbs.shanghai.com/viewthread.php?tid=1708038&page=4&fromuid=373858#pid23238425
http://bbs.shanghai.com/viewthread.php?tid=1708038&page=6&fromuid=373858#pid23721613
http://bbs.shanghai.com/viewthread.php?tid=1708038&page=7&fromuid=373858#pid24016451
http://bbs.shanghai.com/viewthread.php?tid=1708038&page=10&fromuid=373858#pid26468455
[ 本帖最后由 tinalijing 于 2009-6-2 23:26 编辑 ]
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本文总共有6段,我打算分三次打完.每次都会公布原文翻译.
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我们的第一个女儿出生时,为了全身心去创造一个充满温馨爱意的新家,我依然决然地放弃了成功的商业生涯.作为一个妻子,母亲及家庭主妇,我生活的非常幸福,因此尽管这么多年过去了,我也从未后悔过当初的决定.除了创造美好的婚姻和养育孩子,家庭生活也将我训练得多才多艺,油漆,粉刷,木工,修理这些活我无所不能.此外,我不仅办事效率高,而且还是一个打包高手,这是因为丈夫的工作使得我们常常要搬家.而且我的艺术天赋也渐渐在缝制孩子们的衣服和装饰一个个家时体现了出来.
然而,15年后我的生活突然发生了翻天覆地的变化,我不得不返回商界,重新培养外出谋生的能力.尽管咨询了很长时间,然而我和丈夫还是无法沟通,我们的婚姻最终走到了尽头.我们生活方式的差异,导致了这场艰难持久的婚变.
以上文字要求大家中翻英.
1.2段原文翻译在18#
[ 本帖最后由 tinalijing 于 2009-3-5 15:42 编辑 ]
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I have a try first,please tell me where am I wrong.
thank you
原文: 我们的第一个女儿出生时,为了全身心去创造一个充满温馨爱意的新家,我依然决然地放弃了成功的商业生涯.作为一个妻子,母亲及家庭主妇,我生活的非常幸福,因此尽管这么多年过去了,我也从未后悔过当初的决定.除了创造美好的婚姻和养育孩子,家庭生活也将我训练得多才多艺,油漆,粉刷,木工,修理这些活我无所不能.此外,我不仅办事效率高,而且还是一个打包高手,这是因为丈夫的工作使得我们常常要搬家.而且我的艺术天赋也渐渐在缝制孩子们的衣服和装饰一个个家时体现了出来.
译文: when our first daugter was born,I was plunge myself into building a warm and harmonious family so that I gave up the chance to be a successful women.As a wife,mother and housewife,I lived a happy life wigh my family. I was glad that I made this decision.Including bringing up childern and creating a harmonious marriage,I became skilled in doing housework.Such as did painting,whitewash,woodworker and repair.In addition,I became highly efficient and an expert of packing becuase of my husband changed his workplace frequently. Meantime,my talant became materialized go with the making up childern's clothes and decorating each home.
原文:然而,15年后我的生活突然发生了翻天覆地的变化,我不得不返回商界,重新培养外出谋生的能力.尽管咨询了
很长时间,然而我和丈夫还是无法沟通,我们的婚姻最终走到了尽头.我们生活方式的差异,导致了这场艰难持久的婚变.
译文:Nevertheless,my life had brought unbelievable change after 15 years.I had to back to business field and redevelop the ability of earn a living.After a long-term negotiation,I was failed to come to an agreement with my husband,and we get divorced finally. Different life style became the main reason of this marriage crisis.
[ 本帖最后由 Frank.Brown 于 2009-3-10 16:31 编辑 ]
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When my first daughter was born, I made a very firm decision to give up my successful business career so as to put all my heart on building a brand-new home full of love and warmth. As a wife, a mother and a housewife, I lead my life happily. Therefore, though so many years passed till now, I have still not regret for the decision at that moment. Except operating the beautiful marriage and breeding up my lovely children, the family life also trained me to a diversified talented woman. Painting, wood work, repairing, these work make me an able woman in life. Also, I became a good packager because my husband’s job needs us to move all the times, my artery talent be expressed fully due to sewing children’s clothes and decorating our house .
However, after 15 years’ peaceful life, my life has totally changed in a flash. I need to return to the business field and fight for life. Through a long-term consultancy, I still cannot communicate with my husband and my marriage die finally. The differences of life ways made this hard and lasting divorce.
[ 本帖最后由 sissi139 于 2009-3-5 13:24 编辑 ]
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When our daugther was born ,i aslo give up the suessful of comerical work life in order to create for my full heart with fullness and lovely 's home .as a wife,mother and the family of wife, i am very happy in my life,therefore though many years have passed ,i was never regret that i make my mind . Besides had created a nice marriage and nutured my child,the family life would aslo practised me that may have a kill and made everything such us painting ,whitewashing ,carpentering and repairing, these things were made good .Futhermore, i was not only make a somethings of efficiency but aslo was a packing higher.This is beacuse my husband 's work caused we were often movint home .but my art talent was gave an expression which was step by step to sewed my childred's clthotes and Decked the home .
Howe ever,my life was happed to early-shaking changes, i can't avoid to come back to commercework, I need brough up the outer skill again ,although went to consultative for a long time ,but i can't commenicate with my husband,our marriage was went to in the end of final.our life was not different lead to this marriage can't lasting and the marriage had changed.
Sorry for my english ,pls point out make it wrong if you will found it ,thanks.
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我们的第一个女儿出生时,为了全身心去创造一个充满温馨爱意的新家,我依然决然地放弃了成功的商业生涯.作为一个妻子,母亲及家庭主妇,我生活的非常幸福,因此尽管这么多年过去了,我也从未后悔过当初的决定.除了创造美好的婚姻和养育孩子,家庭生活也将我训练得多才多艺,油漆,粉刷,木工,修理这些活我无所不能.此外,我不仅办事效率高,而且还是一个打包高手,这是因为丈夫的工作使得我们常常要搬家.而且我的艺术天赋也渐渐在缝制孩子们的衣服和装饰一个个家时体现了出来.
然而,15年后我的生活突然发生了翻天覆地的变化,我不得不返回商界,重新培养外出谋生的能力.尽管咨询了很长时间,然而我和丈夫还是无法沟通,我们的婚姻最终走到了尽头.我们生活方式的差异,导致了这场艰难持久的婚变.
When my first daughter was born, in order to creat a warm and loving family, I determinedly decided to give up my successful business career.To be a wife, mother and homemaker, I lead a very happy life. Though several years passed, I never regretted my decision. In spite of creating a satisfying marriage and foster babies. The life made me become a painter, plasterer and carpenter and repairer. Besides high working efficiency, I am also a good packer because of the relocations due to my husband's work. And my artistic gift grandually realized in sewing clothes and accessrizing every home.
However, my life completely changed after 15 years living, I have to return to my business career to renewedly caultivate my living ability. Although consulting for a long time, I still can not communicate with my husband and our marriage lead to the end. Our different living styles caused this long lasting and hard divorce.
大家别误解了,这个是我翻的,原文还没有公布.公布的时候我会做标记的.
[ 本帖最后由 tinalijing 于 2009-3-5 14:07 编辑 ]
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这是原文吗？
哇，不敢相信
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不是,这个是我自己翻的
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第一句话我就翻译错误了
"在....时",我翻译成为"在....后"...
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所以说,要看仔细咯.
我要是老师,先扣你一分
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哈哈，觉得很好，会继续来逛的
好久没有翻译了，很有感觉
版主是不是英语专业，做过大量的文学散文翻译练习？
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专业是英语..
在公司翻译写东西,比如合同,专利,协议,说明书等.
散文翻的很少,所以我现在的文字一点都不柔和
现在开始磨练.
希望你经常来,大家可以一起交流
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我们的第一个女儿出生时,为了全身心去创造一个充满温馨爱意的新家,我依然决然地放弃了成功的商业生涯.作为一个妻子,母亲及家庭主妇,我生活的非常幸福,因此尽管这么多年过去了,我也从未后悔过当初的决定.除了创造美好的婚姻和养育孩子,家庭生活也将我训练得多才多艺,油漆,粉刷,木工,修理这些活我无所不能.此外,我不仅办事效率高,而且还是一个打包高手,这是因为丈夫的工作使得我们常常要搬家.而且我的艺术天赋也渐渐在缝制孩子们的衣服和装饰一个个家时体现了出来.
i choose the way to get a warm home, give up my business way with no hesitate. this is the time while my daughter was born. To be a wife, a mother, and the home dealer. i feel it's enough. although this has gone for many years, i do never regret my deicision. not only it create a nice family and give the best environment for my daughter, but also i learned many skills, paiting. repairing... i can do . also, i am very good at packing. did well,
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:lol 幸好你不是.....
PS: 原文在哪儿?让我看看:lol :lol
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原文要等一会,现在有人正在翻译呢..
等3点的时候我发原文
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