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1.商标必须换掉，你们换商标的时候我们要在场监督2.如果由此造成的侵权问题，由你们负责
[ 本帖最后由 Frank.Brown 于 2010-5-25 13:58 编辑 ]
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The Logo must be replaced. we want to on the spot for monitoring when you replace the logo
You will take the responsibilities if it results in infringement
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Logo has to be changed under our supervision
And you are responsible for the tort caused by this issue
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1. The trademark must be replaced. When replacing, We need to be on site and supervise.
2. You are responsible in case of any violation of property right caused.
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we would like you to rework the label under our supervision at the factory.
如果是现场返工的话，第二句可能就用不上了
我的翻译接你参考
you must be responsible of the violation issue.
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I think this version is better.
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说说个人看法：
#2 grace200705 (吟吟)：第1句语气强硬，MUST用得不错，但want to去掉，want to本身有征求性的成分，此处不存在。第2句用you will 语气削弱！
#4 venus_best：第1句的MUST，第2句的ANY，我喜欢！
The LOGO must be replaced, and we must be there.
把两个重点分开，同时强调LOGO必须换，我们必须在场。（就像电影里的，一个人气愤/语气强硬的时候，句子就是那么简短地砸出的！）
如果合成一句The LOGO must be replaced under our supervision. 重点就放在了under our supervision. 当然意思都点到了。
Any violation of property right caused by this will be taken by your side.
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wow, it becomes so simple..
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dear, you are so excellent...
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1.商标必须换掉，你们换商标的时候我们要在场监督
2.如果由此造成的侵权问题，由你们负责
1.The trademark should be replaced ,and we must be on site for supervision when you are changing it.
2.Your party is supposed to take all responsiblities if there is any property issues caused by this .
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1.商标必须换掉，你们换商标的时候我们要在场监督
The logo has to be replaced, and we must be there to supervise when you are doing so.
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谢谢了，解决了
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#7分析的很有道理啊。
The LOGO must be replaced, and we must be there.（言简意赅）
Any violation of property right caused by this will be taken by your side.（被动语态比主动语态好）
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监督没翻译出来~简洁很好但不要漏译了~
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哈，谢谢指点。
在我看来，We MUST be there, 已经足够表达了，我们必须在场（至于在场干嘛，他爱干嘛干嘛）！中英不一定要对等。
We MUST be there when you ****，或许这样顺眼些。
我不宣扬个人主义，所以希望大家别光看着，砸点玉来。
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