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谢谢各位的帮忙，已经改得差不多了，先把内容删了哦，非常谢谢各位的帮忙！！！[ 本帖最后由 hyhsmile 于 2010-6-3 11:04 编辑 ]
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希望各位能耐心的帮帮忙。。。。
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The 21st century is the information age, on the one hand, the rapid development of information technology industry leads an unprecedented prosperity situation ;on the other hand,the incidents which against the information security are continuously occured. As the situation of Network information security is increasingly severe.Cryptographic techniques become one of the key technologies to ensure information security . The thesis analysis and explore its safety based on the introduction of the principle of AES symmetric encryption algorithm and implementation process . Through experimental research methods show us the further display and analysis of its diffusivity, confusionism ,data encryption and other cryptographic rate performance . The advantages and disadvantages of AES will be revealed after compared with other different symmetric encryption algorithms.As an application example of AES we will show it by building a server and client under c #. Nether the platform to achieve the paper-based AES encryption transmission .
很多专有名词实在是不懂。。查过百度后在你的上面稍加修改。。仅供您参考。。。
嘴角上扬的弧度最美。
[ 本帖最后由 为巡查挣工资 于 2010-6-2 19:23 编辑 ]
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21世纪是信息的时代
21 Century is the age of information. 这个表达比较好吧。
一方面 。。。另一方面
on one hand, on the other hand. 你应该把THE去掉。
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age 改成 time 比较好，是on one hand ......on the other hand 吧！
Cryptographic techniques to ensure information security and the most basic is key to the technology。这句话有问题。改成这样 Cryptographic techniques is the most basic technology to ensure the security.不知道好不好！
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LZ，总觉得表达的太复杂，可以用简单的一点来表达。不用都是长句，看你都没有几个句号的。
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谢谢啦，我也感觉很奇怪，可是自己要改的话，不知道从何下手呀。。。。。
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21世纪是信息的时代
21 Century is the age of information.
什么什么时代。。。。。。。。。。就是
the age of ...................
这个是对的。不要改哦。
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