加拿大外贸
刚发了一封英文邮件给客户，同时CC给我师父了（现在教我的），被笑了一番。呵呵，大家帮我评价一下，看看有没问题，需要怎么写比较好点啊？谢谢。。Dear xx,
I want to tell you one thing,about 6168/pcs ,I confirmed with my manager that we need to arrange the delivery once we receive the L/C. We Estimate that will arrange the delivery next Tue(Sep 7).
And about 2760PCS 'S L/C,Could you open it ASAP..Thank you for your cooperation
[ 本帖最后由 patty-chu 于 2010-9-2 10:06 编辑 ]
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有点生硬,语法也有些错误
Dear xxx,
Thank you very much for your kind email.
about the order 6168pcs,double checked with our manager,we are glad to inform you that final we agreen to arrange the shippment immediately after we received the L/C from you,and the goods can be ready for you at 7th,sept,2010
about the 2760pcs order,can you pls be so kind to arrange the L/C for us as early as you can? so that we can go ahead to arrange the production for you without any delay.
Thank you for your great help in advance.
供参考。
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好的，谢谢啊。看来我还要多多加强商务英语书写才行。。
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