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Dear sir,

Haven’t hear from you long time, how are you doing lately.hope you still remember me,Shawn,a XXX manufacturer from China.
We attended to 108th Canton Fair last month, and now a good few clinets purchase our products to prepare for Christmas Day.
so what about you?do you have a plan to purchase some XXX?
Hope to receive your favorable reply

Best Regards

Shawn Zhang
请大家帮我修改下

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Dear Sir,

How are you?

Long time no hearing from you. Hope everything is going well with you.

I am xx from xx factory, which is one of the biggest manufacturer of xx. You purchased xx from us on xx (某年某月).

We attended 108 canton fair last month. It is a pity that we haven't met you at the show. The christmas day is coming, will you buy some xx from us for your market?

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

xx

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Dear sir.
It's a long time I haven't heared from you.How are you recently? Hope everything goes well!
It's me Shawn, a xxx manufacturer in China. We have attended the 108th Canton Fair last month, and luckily I knew some new clients there.Now they are preparing to purchase our products for sales on Christmas Day. And have you had some interest about purchasing some xxx?
I hope to try my best for your sales on Christmas Day!

Hope to receive your reply

Best regards

Shawn Zhang

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LZ 的英语水平在广交会怎么对付的呀

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No news from you for a long time,did everything goes well with you recently?This is Shawn,a XXX manufacturer from China.
We attened the 108th Canton Fair Last month and now most of our other clients start to order our products for Christmas using,
Will you consider to order our products for Christmas too?
Attached you our latest design and quotation for your reference..

FYI

[ 本帖最后由 花的芬芳 于 2010-11-3 16:24 编辑 ]

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支持楼主 参加广交会 我很期待 啥时候 我们也去 哈

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可以说HOW HAVE YOU BEEN?不要说什么hope you still remember me之类的话 没有意义
他不回复不代表他忘了你 他们都很忙的 不要把自己放那么低
要吸引客人 可以付上你说的产品照片 说别的人订货也挺好 总之 大家是伙伴关系 不用太过客套
不然你说still remember me人家会不会想 你怎么知道我的记忆力这么差的？
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