加拿大外贸
Hi, Akshay.Thank you very much for your reply. Very pity missing a chance talking with you in China. I thought your business trip in China would start 17th Jan and would last one week.
We will be on holiday from 29th Jan to 13th Feb for Chinese Spring Festival. So I could not answer your email promptly during this period.
If you don't mind, I'd like to tell you something about Chinese Spring Festival. It's the most important festival in China with a over 3,000 years history. It's a time that all family numbers get together and enjoy themselves. And many customs accompany the Spring Festival. such as burning fireworks. Lion Dancing, Dragon Dancing etc. I'm enclosing a brief introduction of Chinese Spring Festival for you.
The coming Chinese New year is Lunar Rabbit Year. Wish you and your family Good Luck in Lunar Rabbit Year.
Happy Lunar Rabbit Year.
Best regards.
评论
..................无话可说 ............
你回客户邮件的目的是啥？
评论
客户近期是不可能购买的 因为他们刚刚从别外购买了 但今年有购买计划，所以长期联系着呗
评论
我到觉得邮件本身问题不大。。。客户能懂你的意思，那就OK了。
看你是否觉得这样发出去可以？每个人都有自己的想法。。。并非别人的意见就是完美的。
评论
感觉有点长，Chinese Spring Festival出现了三次， Lunar Rabbit Year二次
写作时尽量少出现多次，或用其它代替，某老师说。。
偶英语不好，
不好意思
评论
就简单说一下春节放假，后面的多余没有必要说了
评论
哈哈哈。。。。。。。。。
评论
楼主,你的邮件跟我一样----张的太胖,需要减肥
评论
^_^
评论
有道理 这样的确暴露了我的英语词汇量 捉襟见肘
评论
我只看到一句对客户有用的话，第二句，其他的，人家看完一定觉得浪费了时间，如果关系很好的话，可以客套一些新年有新的合作，介绍春节这种。。。实在没必要
语法
Dear, Akshay.
Thank you very much for your reply. Very pity(pity 是名词，为什么用在这呢？) missing a chance（后面接ING做宾语从句吗？主句呢?用its a pity做主句，或者加个TO ） talking with you in China. I thought your business trip in China would start(started,一定要would?) 17th Jan and would(一定要强调将来时？) last one week.
We will be on holiday from 29th Jan to 13th Feb for Chinese Spring Festival. So I could not answer your email promptly during this period.
If you don't mind, I'd like to tell you something about Chinese Spring Festival. It's the most important festival in China with a over 3,000 years history . its a time that all family numbers get together and enjoy themselves. And many customs accompany the Spring Festival(accompany及物动词，接春节，陪春节？). such as burning fireworks. Lion Dancing, Dragon Dancing etc. I'm enclosing a brief introduction of Chinese Spring Festival for you. （句子多用被动，不要总是I,I,I,看着烦。）
The coming Chinese New year is Lunar Rabbit Year. Wish you and your family Good Luck in Lunar Rabbit Year.
Happy Lunar Rabbit Year.
Best regards.
以上改动纯属个人愚见，望楼主不要见怪，改着改着就停不下来了 FYI
评论
好玩！
评论
Hi XXX,
Hope everything goes well.
I am writing to inform you that The CNY(Chinese New Year) is coming & we(office and factory)are on holiday from 29 January to 12 Feb.
Any problems,Pls kindly contact us.
Have a nice day!
Tina
这个是我给客户发的~~~~
评论
I‘m glad to get your email. It's a pity that I couldn't meet you personally while you were here. I thought your business trip started from 17th Jan and you would stay in China for a week.
CNY's on the way. Our holiday's from 29th Jan to 13th Feb. If there's any chance that you should email me on that period, I will get back to you as soon when I'm back to work.
May be you have heard something of about CNY. It's the most important festival in China with a over 3,000 years history. It's a happy time for family reunion. There are many special activities, such as burning fireworks. Lion Dancing, Dragon Dancing etc. Also I'm enclosing a brief introduction to CNY for you. Hope you will like it.
Have nice day.
加拿大电商做区块链为什么都注册新加坡基金会 目前做区块链项目的客户都会通过注册基金会来作为项目的主体，为什么都在新加坡注册基金会，首先性价比高，而且新加坡市场也比较成熟，项目 加拿大电商露天电影首发——葡中双语字幕《中央车站》 http://bbs.shanghai.com/thread-1714999-1-1.html screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt='Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoo
·中文新闻 2024 年美国大选结果：特朗普不能吓到安东尼·艾博尼斯、彼得
·中文新闻 2024 年美国大选：哈里斯落选后，乔·拜登的演讲试图提振民主党