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Yerterday, the after sales department of alibaba went to our office and told us how to use this tool. I felt i became more confusing after this lesson .but it absolutely improved me . at least i knew how to use it . you know before this time ,i just didn't know how to transfer your froducts to the internet.Today i receive an inquiry .but it came from nirilira of Afraic , i was cheated ,but i was encouraged to finished my work.
i hope i can get an order ,no matter how big it is . i will appreciate it
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u'd better keep your diary in the same post
then i can follow u everyday
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Congratulations!!!!!!!!
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no problem haha....
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thank you .........
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有点无聊，所以帮你改改语法错误。
Yerterday（应该是Yesterday）, the after sales（这里最好是after-sales，加连字符，变成adj） department of alibaba went to our office and told us how to use this tool.
I felt i became more confusing （confused，因为是你被动的，confusing表示物让人产生混乱） after this lesson .but it absolutely improved me（很少有这种表达的吧，应该是However, I got improved/improvement from the lesson.另起一句，要用however,不能用but，因为but是并列连词，就是说一定要有两个对等的句子，用逗号隔开而已。而另起一句要用副词however，不过这个是很多人都犯的。而用improved或者improvement都可以，一个更注重于动作，一个是你得到的内容，其实用improved更生动。） .
at least i knew how to use it . you know before this time （You know是插入语，一般后面要有逗号，否则这样会让人以为后面有宾语） ,i just didn't know how to transfer （一般不用transfer这个词吧，好像有点过于大词小用，用put就可以啦。） your froducts（应该是our products吧） to the internet.
Today i receive an inquiry .（应该是逗号）but it came（既然前面用现在时来描述一般事实，这里也可以用现在时，要不两个都统一用过去式） from nirilira of Afraic（what？） , i was cheated （这里应该另起一句了吧，不能用逗号了。） ,but i was encouraged to finished my work.
i hope i can get an order ,no matter how big it is（这里应该是用how small，因为你是在让步说无论多小！虽然好像中文说无论多大，可是英文你要根据你让步的是什么来看） . i will appreciate it
很多句首还有专有名词都没大写，很多标点都写错。而且要写标点的时候不用空一格，是写完标点才需要空一格。
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楼上的英语好厉害哦，小女子佩服
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我快哭了。。。。。。。。
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i am so appreciate it...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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It should be "I appreciate it so much."
Hah...
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继续啊 天天练习 英语会越来越好的
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practise makes perfect,come on !
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我很佩服。
我看得原文头很晕
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大家一起努力吧
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