加拿大外贸
这是我写的我们公司的公司简介，小女子不才啊~英语实在是不咋的！希望大家帮我看下有什么错误的语法或句子！帮我纠正纠正！先谢谢啦~ABOUT US:
POUKIM, specilized in integration of digital accessories design, development, manufacture and marketing . Our main business is around all kinds of high-end accessories for cellphone, computer, PSP (like Apple, Blackberry, HTC, Samsung,NOKIA),such as. LCD protective film, leather case, silicone keyboard membrane, portable power supply, headphones, etc. Enriching the product range,we will offer customer with one-stop service.
POUKIM has established business partnerships with many famous enterprises from domestic and overseas, and won widespread praise from our customer because of high quality products and reliable after-sales service. With a developing sales network both home and abroad, its products are distributed through China and exported to more than 100 countries and areas including Southeast Asian ,North America, the Middle East etc.
POUKIM not only focus on the development of its own brand, but also accept OEM / ODM orders, the company gradually expand its market share in highly competitive environment due to diversified business model, we believe we will become the industry leader in the joint efforts with you.
Our development principle: “BEYOND” “PRACTICAL” “INNOVATION”.
Our management idea is :HIGH QUALITY AND EXCELENT AFTER-SALES SERVICE,POUKIM DO IT FOR YOU.
If you have any comments or ideas about our products or service, please email to [email protected]. We are looking forward to cooperating with you sincerely.
[ 本帖最后由 Elinayu 于 2011-8-16 12:33 编辑 ]
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看了第一句我就不想看下去了 LZ别见怪 但是我觉得LZ还是用有道词典看下例句或者百度下语法吧
虽然现在很少讲语法 但是你公司简介 不能太含糊吧
specilize这个的用法 好好看看 要不你就换成从句的方式 别缺谓语啊
每次我看到缺谓语的句子我就头疼
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谢谢你！第一句我还是不会写。后面我朋友也帮我改了很多！
加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards ......................................... 加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光
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