加拿大外贸
非常抱歉，由于产品升级耽误了交货时间，希望升级后的产品能更好的满足你们的需求。我们包装纸箱是专门设计的，非常牢固，此次的破损可能是运输公司操作不当造成的。请见附件我们的包装纸箱图片。
另外，目前我们19寸，22寸，26寸，32寸的产品在做促销，我们仓库里每个型号有500pcs,价格非常好,如果有订单，我们可以快速的交货。26寸和32寸的是升级后的。
“I'm very sorry, due to the product to upgrade the delay time of delivery, hope that the updated products can better meet your needs.
our packaging carton is specially designed, very strong, this time damage may be transportation company caused by the improper operation. Please see attached our packaging carton pictures.
recently our 19'' 22'',26''and 32'' touch monitor(replacement elo 1739L,1939L,2239L)have a preferential promation,we have 1000pcs for each model in stock.26''and 32'' is upgraded model."
请大家帮忙改改，谢谢啦~
[ 本帖最后由 Namiko-zs 于 2011-9-23 16:48 编辑 ]
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we are so regretful for the delay of the delivery time of the goods caused by the upgrade of our products. however, we sincerely hope that the upgraded products can better satisfy you.
as for the damage, we have to say it's probably caused by the undue handling of the freighter considering the fact that our packaging carton is specially designed and very strong just as attached pictures.
besides, our 19'', 22'',26''and 32'' ( upgrated model) touch monitor(replacement elo 1739L,1939L,2239L)have a sales promotion recently.we have 1000pcs for each model in stock so we can arrange the despatch swiftly.
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挺好 但是第一段句子有点长了 哈哈
we are so regretful for the delay caused by the products upgrade . however, we still hope that the upgraded products can better satisfy you.
in respect of the damage, we have to say it's probably caused by the undue handling of the freighter，because our packaging carton is specially designed and very strong just as attached pictures shown.
[ 本帖最后由 yy169169 于 2011-9-23 14:03 编辑 ]
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呵呵，谢谢前辈指教......
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不要用update 用 improve ！！！lz 快换！！
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。。不要前辈 我汗死。。
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呵呵，我一看到元老这个词，不由得就想起电视里边那些武功盖世、功德圆满的形象。对了，你好像英语西语都不错啊
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谢谢各位高手的热情帮助，再次谢谢大家啦
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不好英语4及没过 西语小学水平
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非常抱歉，由于产品升级耽误了交货时间，希望升级后的产品能更好的满足你们的需求。
我们包装纸箱是专门设计的，非常牢固，此次的破损可能是运输公司操作不当造成的。请见附件我们的包装纸箱图片。
另外，目前我们19寸，22寸，26寸，32寸的产品在做促销，我们仓库里每个型号有500pcs,价格非常好,如果有订单，我们可以快速的交货。26寸和32寸的是升级后的。
“We are so sorry about the goods was delay the time to delivery . Becaused by the upgrade of our products .hope that the products can better satisfy your need it
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呵呵，谦虚了吧 至少西语不是小学水平，不然那么专业的西语词汇你都会？
加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光 加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards .........................................
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