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中国的金刚石锯片因质优价廉而驰名于世。依托世界最出名的石材生产和加工基地水头，泉州成为生产锯片最重要的地区之一。在当地石材开采和加工大量使用锯片时，生产的锯片不断加入科技，提高质量，降低成本，并且研制出多项国际先进的锯片技术，如多层刀头锯片，消音锯片等等。Chinese diamond saw blade has won a world fame for super quality and competitive price. Supported by Shuitou-the bestknown base for producing and processing stone, Quanzhou becomes the most important diamond saw blade-producing region in China. The developers gather experience, improve technology and quality and lower production cost while mining and factory processing constantly. Many international advanced saw blade technique were created here such as multi-layer diamond segment, silent saw blade etc.
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你一句中文一句英语对应着翻译，很汉化的，我译的如下，供你参考：
The Saw Blade of Diamond is famous for its quality and competitive price, which located in Shuitou, Quanzhou City, the Centre of stone-processing. The manufacturer improve technology and lower the cost. The advanced technique were absorbed in our new products, such as multi-layer diamond segment, silent saw blade etc.
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谢谢你的热心帮助。如果去掉中文不看，只看英文，有什么问题吗，谢谢大家帮助。
Chinese diamond saw blade has won a world fame for super quality and competitive price. Supported by Shuitou-the bestknown base for producing and processing stone, Quanzhou becomes the most important diamond saw blade-producing region in China. The developers gather experience, improve technology and quality and lower production cost while mining and factory processing constantly. Many international advanced saw blade technique were created here such as multi-layer diamond segment, silent saw blade etc.
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求高手帮忙看看英语部分吧
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你的是直译，而且许多不符合英语习惯，也没完整，让我帮你翻译。
China diamond saw blades is world famous for good quality and lower price. Relying on the world's most famous
stone production and processing base of Shuitou, Quanzhou has become one of the most important areas of blade
production. High technology has been added ceaselessly to the production of saw blade which was of heavy use in
local stone mining and processing, which improve quality and reduce costs. In addtion, a number of international
state-of-the-art blade technology was developed, such as multi-layer head blades, Silencer Saw Blades, etc. .
[ 本帖最后由 AlanICC 于 2012-2-19 01:03 编辑 ]
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谢谢帮忙，你翻译的不错。不知道其他人还有什么意见吗，我觉得我翻译那个有些地方也是可取的，哈哈。
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天呢，如果纯粹从语言学的角度，你翻译的可以丢进垃圾桶里。绝对不是打击你。
也许你翻译的时候付出了很多精力，但是怎么用，用哪个，是你的事。
[ 本帖最后由 AlanICC 于 2012-2-20 22:28 编辑 ]
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