加拿大外贸
我刚进外贸公司 三四天 今天，老板让我 给一位我们的客户 回函，（客户是说上我们公司来视察）下边是我写的 看看行不行？ 各种求大神啊Dear Mr. ******
I am very glad to hear from you, I on behalf of the the ****
*********Co.,Ltd. welcome you . We China have a old
saying "There are friends from afar, enjoying themselves," I think realy
coincides with this old saying at this moment.
As you said, there is a certain complementarity in many business both of
our companies. Before you, our company have a lot of good cooperation
with many companies in Southeast Asia , and we also consider that the
Southeast Asia market is great important . I carefully read your mail and
taking note of your company handle the products and can you tell me
what's product of our company that you primarily interested in? I would
like to cooperate with your company will be very pleasant.
In order to promote the understanding of our two companies, we are very
pleased you could come to our company to visit. In addition, if it is
convenient, you can put your arranged schedule in China tell us, we will
arrange for you a happy memories in *******
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万能的 啊 怎么可以这样冷落 一个新人呢~
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呵呵，写得好长好长啊！！
不用这么多crap that are not relative and important to your business.
你这封邮件的意思是不是想告诉客户，你们的生意做的挺大，也欢迎他来看厂呀？那就可以简明点写哦。
还有哦，你才发表问题十几分钟，就说大家没人理你哦，这样的心态不好的。需求别人的帮助，就不应该对别人还有苛求。
好好努力吧，以下的FYI
Dear Mr.
Glad to receive your mail and thx for your great interest on our company and products.
As you know, we，the manufacturer specializing in （你们的产品）enjoy a good fame in cooperation with companies in South American(这个你们自己在哪些国家，自己写上吧）.
If you are available to visit China, welcome to our factory. We are always ready for your visit.
Any more questions on our products, pls don't hesitate to contact us.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best regards,
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信件还是简明扼要的好 突出重点 交代清楚就可以了
个人观点是长了点
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各位前辈指教的是~在下谨记
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谢谢您的耐心回答~
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恩 谢谢您的提点 我会改正
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看到你写的信，哥凌乱了有木有，少年，要注意细节啊
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呵呵 不知道 前辈能否指点些许 我是菜鸟中的菜鸟 ~自愧不如 各位武林老前辈啊
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感觉有点长呢，别给老外说中国的谚语了，看点商务英语的书呢
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你这个就是中国英语啊，兄台，刚开始就越简单越好嘛，但是把语法，单词什么的整对了呗。。。。
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是你们之前联系过的客户,就不用再介绍公司那么详细了吧.客人要来你们公司视察,要问清会来几个人,是否需要去接他,还有时间地点什么的一定要问清楚...
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you can put your arranged schedule in China tell us
这典型的中国英语啊
尽量避免从句套从句吧
如果必须使用从句，请正确使用。
我觉得咱们都以中国人的说话思路能看明白，真要按老外的思路和语法习惯来看你的从句
估计会晕菜。。。
有点儿尖锐，抱歉哈
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一般我都写的很简单
This is XX from XX company, nice to know you!
Glad to hear you are coming to visit us, could you advise you schedule here? And then we could prepare the ameeting in advance.
our company have good cooperation with many companies in Southeast Asia, We hope you'll be our partern soon. Noted your company handle many products, could you tell me what's product do you primarily interested in from our company?
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字里行间还是蛮热情洋溢的嘛...鼓励鼓励...东南亚的还是说国语吧
加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光 加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards .........................................
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