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Enclosed please find the invoice and packing list which are already have delivered to your warehouse. And arrange the payment kindly！有没有语病？
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[ 本帖最后由 Namiko-zs 于 2012-6-6 12:34 编辑 ]
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怎么没人帮忙啊？？ ‘
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pls kindly find the attached CI & PL for goods sent to your warehouse, also pls kindly arrange the balance payment ASAP at your convenient time.
Thanks & have a nice day!
FYI
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尽量在商务上不用感叹号和缩写。其他基本上意思说明白了。 Enclosed please find the invoice and packing list of which already delivered to your warehouse. Please kindly arrange the payment.
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不用修改啊。直接也到，很明了。很好啊，要相信自己才行啊。
BTW， PLS settle the payment kindly！
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谢谢各位大侠的帮助~
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which are already have delivered，语法有问题啊。3L翻译得不错呀。
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是有点问题，你要这样写的话，which 就指代“invoice and packing list”了，显然这不是你要表达的意思，另外，deliver 也不能用完成时。
楼主可参考3楼的句子。
[ 本帖最后由 jason007 于 2012-6-5 09:50 编辑 ]
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Dear **
Goods has sent to your warhouse.
pls refer to attached CI&PL.
And kindly arrange the balance payment at your ....
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LZ 这句英语是有问题的；参照#3的英语表述。
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Enclosed please find the invoice and packing list which have been delivered to your warehouse. Pleased arrange the payment kindly.
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which have been delivered to your warehouse
都已经说了，这个定语指代不明了。这样就变成发票和装箱单是送到仓库的意思了。
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我想表达的是，我们前面已经有好几批货物送到客户的工厂了，但是客户都没有付款。附件是已经到他们工厂的那几批货物的所有箱单和发票，然后要求他们安排付款。
求翻译~
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Enclosed please find the invoice and packing list of which the covering goods have been delivered to your warehouse. Please arrange the payment accordingly.
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3L正解,言简意赅.
pls kindly find the attached CI & PL for goods (which was)sent to your warehouse, also pls kindly arrange the balance payment ASAP at your convenient time.
扩号内为省略,which指代货物.而并不是CI&PI.
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