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急！谢谢！帮我改改邮件，自认英语不好，客户发了订单，和单据及装运要求后Dear ***,
Owing to 8 days holiday in china,maybe it will be shipped in early Oct.but we will try to get a earliest shipment,I will confirm it and reply to you on monday.
I will carefully check the documents as our measure data.
We will make all documents as your instructions.
Pls sent your the payment voucher,so that I can arrange to be product.
Waiting for your reply!
Thanks & regards,
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已经很好了 不用修改
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Dear ***,
Goods will be shipped at the beginning of Oct due to Chinese Holiday.But we will try to get a earlier shipment for you.
I will check and keepyou informed on Next Monday
Packing data will be checked carefully
Please kindly make the palyment so that we can arrange the production asap.
Waiting for your reply!
Thanks & regards,
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因为有过一次货物到目的港说，我们提单箱单上的数据跟目的港实际测量的不一样，所以我想在邮件中，无意强调 按照我们测量的数据（as our measure data.）你觉得怎么样
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支持2楼.
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这是一般中国人常犯的错误，不过老外已经习惯了，也就没太大关系了。
还有说话方式还是很Chinglish，这个需要多看英语报纸来纠正
英文报纸最好是 FT 这种类型的，比较正式，而且也都是和商业有关的
希望对你们有帮助
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