加拿大外贸
刚刚从展会回来，想抓紧时间联系客户。由于第一次参展，跟踪邮件不知道怎样写比较好，希望大家能给我点意见加以改进。以下是我写的：Dear Mr.XX ,
I was so honor to meet you in HK Mega Show Part 1, Thank you for your visiting.
First of all , please let me introduce ourselves , our company specialize in this field for 10 years with the strength of outdoor umbrella,golf umbrella,gift umbrella,etc... We view your website carefully,and have much interested to bulid business relationship with you.
Next email,I will send the detail information of umbrella which you asked in our booth.
Any comment by return are much appriciated.
Thanks and best regards
Sampo
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为什么都没人理我。。。555555555
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感觉你写的已经很好喽、、、、、、、呵呵
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其实，你应该直接说明你们在香港展会上见过面，客人询过你的产品事宜，然后再介绍你公司，这样一来，我想客人会比较愿意看下去，而你一介绍自己的公司，我个人认为比较像是推销信~~另外，论坛上好像都有类似的帖子，你可以搜搜~
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I think your customer have the more interest on your product and your advantage than your introduce
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好的，谢谢你。~~~
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标题： Group Photo 客户 with 我们 on FIC
Hi, ***,
How are you doing? This is ** from ***.
Glad to get your name card from FIC fair.
Regarding the ***products your selected on the fair, glad to be informed that's our strong products!
We are one of the biggest*** manufacturer and exporter in China.（优势）
If you want know more about us or our products, pls revert me!
Thanks&Best regards,
Sincerely,
Jim
Other Info. FYI
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Our Catalogue:
Sorbitol, Mannitol, HFCS, CMC, Xanthan Gum, Liquid Glucose,
Malto Dextrin, Citric Acid, Dextrose, and etc.
Our Clients:
SORONI, NESTLE(Israel), Coca-cola(Philippines),
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Hello*** Very glad to meet you in the fair.The following is the quotion of the item you selected.
Please be note. If anything please feel free to let me know. Thanks.
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确实太长了感觉
8楼的不错，简洁明了
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这么多语法错误，这种情况要是发生在我们公司，老早要被开掉了。
First of all , please let me introduce ourselves , our company specialize[->specializes] in this field for 10 years with the strength[strength是力量的意思，你肯定想表达specialized in producing xxx] of outdoor umbrella,golf umbrella,gift umbrella,etc... We view your website carefully啥意思？,and have much interested[much和interested不能连用, a lot of interest还差不多] to bulid business relationship with you.
加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards ......................................... 加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光
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