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各位朋友前辈们，小女子英文不怎么好，麻烦大家帮忙看看下面的公司简介写法正确吗？有没有哪些地方语法不正确的呢？请帮忙指出，不胜感激。。About us:
Recorder Technology found in 2010 in Shenzhen.It is a special company in researching ,developing and selling Security Electronics products. Our company mainly produce Hard disk recorders, surveillance cameras, network video cameras products. The company have passed ISO9001:2000 quality management system.All our products have FCC,CE,Rohs certificates.
The company adheres to the "strives for the survival by the quality, seek development by quality, reputation for market, to management for efficiency" purposes, set up "the unity, the scientific innovation" spirit of enterprise, establish a "people-oriented, reconciliation" values, to create first-class enterprise, producing quality products.
Our products deeply trust and support of the general customers . Company products are widely used in airports, Banks, hotels, ports, highways, large supermarkets, factories, modern building and so on. We always adhere to the customer as the center, your request, our standard; Your satisfaction, our pursuit.
Companies with high quality products, good reputation, high quality service, products have been sold well all over the country provinces, municipalities, autonomous regions and exported to Europe, America, southeast Asia, Africa and other countries. The company wholeheartedly welcome customers at home and abroad hand in hand, mutual benefit and win-win, create brilliance! Welcome OEM.
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建议去外贸英语版块，
建议把中文简介贴出来
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写得有点中文式英语， 你可以多多浏览外国公司的简介，参照他们的一些用词。
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建议搜索一家同行业的国外公司，抄袭篡改下人家的简介
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写的太长，很多老外顾不得细看就DEL了
建议楼主简化一点，说几个重点，比方说产品，认证，规模就可以了
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这是楼主公司网站的英文简介，不是开发信。
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