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Different grade of MAC(产品名称) are designed and produced according to different market demand, GG sales department Ⅱ（第二销售部门） is in charge of the marketing & sales to Europe and the area where high grade MAC(产品名称) are needed.Due to focus on high-grade MAC(产品名称) only,our department don't accept low-grade order and low-price OEM order because we focus on high-grade products only. With the support of senior professors in local university, we have established a super hard material lab specially to analyze MAC(产品名称) , by the hard effort, we keep refining the MAC(产品名称) mixture for making NBC(产品名称). In addition, we are a member MAC(产品名称) association and machine association . In our association, we have the opportunity to get acquaintance of the newest and the best MAC(产品名称) technique and the machine from every cornor of the world. Base on this advantage, we strive for becoming the best cost-effect manufacturer of MAC(产品名称).
By forceful technical support and scientific research, we always experimenting new formula to lower the cost on the premise of good quality. As the member of machine association, we have many opportunities to test hundreds of NBC(产品名称) from all over the world. We also appreciate that customers provide NBC(产品名称) technical information for us to research.
主要看看英语语法或者哪里是否需要改进，谢谢了
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Different grades of MAC(产品名称) are designed and produced according to different market demands , GG sales department Ⅱ（第二销售部门） is in charge of the marketing & sales to Europe and the area where high grade MAC(产品名称) are needed.
Due to focus on high-grade MAC(产品名称) only,our department don't accept low-grade order and low-price OEM order With the support of senior professors in local university, we have established a super hard material lab speciallyin analysing MAC(产品名称) , by the hard effort, we keep refining the MAC(产品名称) mixture for making NBC(产品名称). In addition, we are a member of MAC(产品名称) association and machine association . In our association, we have the opportunity to get acquaintance of the newest and the best MAC(产品名称) technique and the machine from every cornor of the world. Base on this advantage, we are striving for becoming the best cost-effect manufacturer of MAC(产品名称).
By forceful technical support and scientific research, we always experimenting new formula to lower the cost on the premise of good quality. As the member of machine association, we have many opportunities to test hundreds of NBC(产品名称) from all over the world. We also appreciate that customers provide NBC(产品名称) technical information for us to research.
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谢谢，很认真，我犯了很多错误，呵呵。那些表情就是提示我修改的地方，哈哈，再次感谢
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不知道哪里是否还有错？我改到下面了，大家再帮忙看看，呵呵。
Different grades of MAC(产品名称) are designed and produced according to different market demands , GG sales department Ⅱ（第二销售部门） is in charge of the marketing & sales to Europe and the area where high grade MAC(产品名称) are needed.
Due to focus on high-grade MAC(产品名称) only,our department don't accept low-grade order and low-price OEM order With the support of senior professors in local university, we have established a super hard material lab speciallyin analysing MAC(产品名称) , by the hard effort, we keep refining the MAC(产品名称) mixture for making NBC(产品名称). In addition, we are a member of MAC(产品名称) association and machine association . In our association, we have the opportunity to get acquaintance of the newest and the best MAC(产品名称) technique and the machine from every cornor of the world. Base on this advantage, we are striving for becoming the best cost-effect manufacturer of MAC(产品名称).
By forceful technical support and scientific research, we always experimenting new formula to lower the cost on the premise of good quality. As the member of machine association, we have many opportunities to test hundreds of NBC(产品名称) from all over the world. We also appreciate that customers provide NBC(产品名称) technical information for us to research.
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U R most welcome ~
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修改了部分语法不当，并出于规范及行文流畅修改了部分用词和句子，用*标记的即是修改过的地方，有部分冠词的删除可能没有标记出来！
Different grades of MAC(产品名称) are designed and produced according to different *demands , GG sales department Ⅱ（第二销售部门） is in charge of the marketing & sales business towards Europe and *other areas where high grade MAC(产品名称)*注意名词是否可数 are needed.
Due to *the specific focus on high-grade MAC(产品名称), our department *would not accept low-grade *products order and low-price OEM order. With the support of senior professors in local university, we have established a super hard material lab *specializing in researches on/of MAC(产品名称). *With hard efforts, we keep refining the MAC(产品名称) mixture *to manufacture greater NBC(产品名称). In addition, we are a member of *the MAC(产品名称) association and *the machine association *where we have the opportunity to gain acquaintance *with the *best and newest MAC(产品名称) *techniques and *machines from *all over the world. *Based on this advantage, we *strive to become the best cost-effect manufacturer of MAC(产品名称).
*With solid technical support and scientific *researches, we *have been seeking for/experimenting on new formula to lower the cost on the premise of *high quality. As *a member of *the machine association, we have many opportunities to test hundreds of NBC(产品名称) from all over the world. NBC(产品名称) technical information provided by customers is also highly appreciated to help our researches.
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我刚才看了下，您改的，真的不错，谢谢，原来错误的地方还很多，唉！
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我觉得语法不是很重要关键是有些关键词汇和专业的术语。还有就是我看完完全没有看出你们公司的优势在哪里？没有突出你们公司的特色，介绍的太全面，没有一些精细的特色在里面，我觉得这些才是你写公司简介的精髓。谢谢
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嗯，可是突出优势暂时也想不到很多，呵呵，不知道您有什么好建议没？
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