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Because at the end of the year CTN and electroplating factory will priority to arrange the larger of ordersCan you add the quantity with double then we can ship before CNY.
Please see the PI and if no problem, please sign back to us asap, then we can buy materials and start mass production.
Thanks for your kind understanding and supports
(英语小白的英文邮件,有很多不足的地方,欢迎大家指出,谢谢 )
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Since CTN and the electroplating factory will arrage larger orders prior to others at the end of the year, could you please add double quantity to ensure that we can ship before CNY?
Please check the PI and sign it back to us asap. Then we will start mass production.
Thanks for your kind understanding and support.
点评一下,第一句句式是prior to, priority是名词,语法上有问题。第二句double放在名词前面作定语。第三句纯属主观修改,购买材料大批量生产可以省略前半句。
仅供参考。
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谢谢点评,菜鸟还需要加油哦
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