加拿大外贸
问题一：忽视礼节 语气生硬Subject: Give me a hand
Tim,
Mr. Crystal from Minster Inc. called earlier, and asked for our sales strategies for their new product. Pls send our information to him at [email protected] by end of business today.
Frank
[分析]：如果弗兰克是蒂姆的上司，上列的书写语气无可厚非；然而，若彼此只是同事，不管克里斯多先生是多么重要的客户，都应避免下指令的语气。应将原本的“要求语气”转变为“请求语气”。
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Subject: Huge favor needed! Please give me a hand!
Tim,
I need a favor.
Mr. Crystal from Minster Inc. called earlier, and asked for our sales strategies for their new product. Unfortunately, I am leaving before noon for Hong Kong for business training. I wonder if you could search your files and send our information to him at [email protected].
If possible, please send him the information by end of business today as he needs it for a meeting with our product managers tomorrow.
I will appreciate your big help.
Sincerely yours,
Frank
丁军
Apr.2, 2019
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That really gives me a huge help!
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