加拿大外贸
现在的情况下，是客户给了我快递帐号，我样品寄出去，在网上查，已经被客户签收了，是昨天就签收了，但是没有给我回邮件，于是我想发个邮件问问I think you have received our sample,is it ok,hope can hear good news from you.
这是我写的邮件，但是觉得自己写得很不好，所以想请求教高手，是怎么写的。谢谢
[ 本帖最后由 echo223 于 2010-1-19 21:14 编辑 ]
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Please advise your comments after you reviewed the samples.
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Hi friend ,
Have a good day ！
I think you had received our products,how about it ?doesn't work well ?
We want to confirm ,can you reply ?
Any questions,please tell me .
Best Regards
xx
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Hello ,
Have you received the sample?Are there in good condition?
Pls give us your kindly reply.
Waiting for your information.
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Good day!
Have you received my sample? Any comment please!
I am looking forward to your good news.
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Hi XXX,
have you received my sample ？
How do you think about it.
Look forward to your reply.
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Dear XXX,
How are you!
I think that you had receipt the sample that i sent it to you on XXX!
How about of these samples,Please kindly advise it if you have any comments.
Thank you,waiting for your reply!
B.RGDS
xxx
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谢谢大家，已经发了，客户也回邮件了，如下
Dear Echo,
Well received your samples many thanks
We have remitted them to our client and we are waiting for his selection
We will inform you as soon as possible
Thanks & best regards
Gen
----- Original Message -----
Dear Gen
I think you have received our sample,is it ok,Please advise your comments
looking forward to your reply.
With best rgds
Echo
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Do you have test the sample already?How about your opinion?We will be appreciate to hear from you comment,Thanks
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一个重要的问题. 样品是客户买的还是你免费提供的
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echo，你发出去的那个邮件真的很不好，你该跟大家学习下，写外贸邮件，切记，一定要用老外的句子结构去书写，不能按中国人自己的语序去写，而你恰恰犯了这个错误。而且错的惨不忍睹。再次，力求简洁. ----------------深圳雅意翻译公司张海梅。
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我也用了，谢谢哈“Good day!
I am Cindy.Do you test the sample already?How about your opinion?we will be appreciate to hear from your comments.
thanks
Best regards.
”
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Good
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能写的很专业当然是好，但语言的目的是理解和被理解，既然老外都看懂了，我们就不必吹毛求疵了，当然下次力求做到更好一些，Echo还是大胆地去表达自己，不管是否犯错，当然尽量写的好一些
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加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光 加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards .........................................
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