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我觉得如果你还有几天就要考新托福了,那么主攻一下写作部分还是很有提升空间的.我之前考托的时候,坚持每两天背一天范文,因为我知道自己的创造力有限,只能借鉴达人们的好句子啦.但是我发现有个问题,即使在范文中,有的词还是用的不够恰当.比如说: They will learn the bad habits. 这个短句,想表达的意思是他们将养成坏习惯,这个learn就用的不太合适，最地道的写法是：They will develop bad habits. 下面我找了35句经典写作用句，我觉得很多句子都有容易犯错的地方，有时一个词的差别看似微妙，意思可能就大不同了呢！ The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. 改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization. 2. For example, you work in a big factory. 改进: Suppose you work in a big factory. 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. 改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. 4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. 改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. 5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. 改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. 6. Their brain is still very young. 改进: They are still immature. 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. 改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. 8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. 改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. 10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. 11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. 改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. 改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. 改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. 16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. 改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. 17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. 改进: This knowledge will become part of you. 19. They cannot think clearly. 改进: They cannot think straight. 20. Money can improve their living standard. 改进: Money can improve their life. 21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. 改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. 22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. 改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. 23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. 改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano. 改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. 25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. 改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. 26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. 改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. 改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. 28. What's about nonsmokers? 改进: What about nonsmokers? 29. Why not to be a non-smoker? 改进: Why not be a non-smoker? 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life. 改进: Everyone has friends in his life. 31. I am not good at maths, but English 改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? 改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? 33.It is children who clear about their interests. 改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. 34. I agree the latter idea. 改进: I agree with the latter idea. 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. 改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. 怎么样，有些句子确实是你我常会犯的错，记住最地道的用法吧。想提高托福写作的水平，经常练个几篇挺重要的，只列提纲的话可能在真正考试的时候好多词都想不起来了。现在网上有一个秦苏珊英语托福写作挑战赛，把你写的作文上传会有专家老师批改，我觉得这样不错啊，知道错点在哪儿，才有提高的可能啊。反正以我的经验，多练笔，多背范文，不知不觉你的作文水平就会有很大进步的！

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