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Dear Mr.XXX:Another week has gone . In the passed week I was thinking how can we get replies from you .What a pity,thinking result in 0 except confusing. Let's make it easy.Would you please choose the right one which you think from following answers and send it back to me.
Question:Commets about quotation.
A: Price is too high,we'll not consider to cooperate with you .
B: Price is a bit higher,we'll contacts with you later
C: Price is Ok,we will update to you soon.
D: On consulting,not be confirmed yet
Thanks in advance!
Wish you have a wonderful weekend!
[ 本帖最后由 wankai2755 于 2010-5-29 08:52 编辑 ]
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这样不好吧。
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http://bbs.shanghai.com/thread-2698258-1-1.html
去哪看看吧
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额这个客户有点特殊，美国的一个很HOT的品牌。一直在做，只是通过欧洲的另一家公司简接在做。现在刚刚直接联系上。只是想他吭一声。
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anymore?
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那就说“open your fucking mouth!”（自己对着墙壁说）
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Dear Mr.XXX:
Another week has gone . In the passed week I was thinking how can we get replies from you .What a pity,thinking result in 0 except confusing. Let's make it easy.Would you please choose the right one which you think from following answers and send it back to me.
Question:Commets about quotation.
A: Price is too high,we'll not consider to cooperate with you .
B: Price is a bit higher,we'll contacts with you later
C: Price is Ok,we will update to you soon.
D: On consulting,not be confirmed yet
Thanks in advance!
Wish you have a wonderful weekend!
呵呵。这种还真是第一次见。。不过有时候。。有些事就是如此意外。。楼主。。你要不要就试一下这种风格。。不过把那个A..B..C..D..改一下下..从各种方面考虑..第一:价格..第二;质量。。第三：他直接没看当掉了你的。。等等你所想到的方面。。。我也想知道这样的信发出去会不会有意想不到的结果。。嘿嘿。。
有时候。。改变。。就在转角的那个背面。。。
嘴角上扬的弧度最美。
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7楼猜对了，之前我发过一封类似风格的邮件。是在确定客户已死的情况下发的。结果气死回生。现在这封邮件我准备周五发出。大家有空帮我修改修改，想尽量完善，一击必杀。上一封邮件下面附下供大家参考。
To: xxxx
Subject: Re: visit
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Dear xxx:
I'm not sure whether it's useful to write to you again.Silence saying that "hey buddy you should give up."Anyhow ,give up isn't a good habit,I think.So i write to you again,hope we can do some business in the future.
Wish you all the best!
客
Sent: Monday, March 15, 2010 2:00 PM
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To: xxxx
Subject: Re:Re:visit
Hi XXXX,
hey buddy u should not give up… its been very very busy that is why have not been able to make a trip, don’t give up wl visit soon.
b.rgd
xxxx
后面的我就不附了。感觉有时候用不标准的英语说出自己最真实的想法最容易打动客户
[ 本帖最后由 wankai2755 于 2010-5-27 20:17 编辑 ]
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太夸张。谈生意不是选择题啦。
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而且选项也不好~~~~~~~~~
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选项怎么改好点呢？
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我个人觉得你写的邮件太生硬了，而且感觉上你是在质问你的潜在客户，感觉上有点不太尊重
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我刚刚发出一封类似的邮件。
看楼主写的，我后悔了。
我写的很简单的。
As to the issue we talked this week, could you give me some of your feedbacks about this deal?
Tomorrow is weekend, Wish you have a nice day.
Best regards!
这样写，会不会让我死啊
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LZ写的太生硬了吧,我要是客户我应该接受不了,8楼的不错,值得借鉴
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要我写就简单了
Dear Sir,
Any updated feedback about our biz case?
It's quiet long period since we contacted last time.
I am looking forward to your reply eagerly.
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