加拿大进出口外贸各位 老师,帮我打个分,这段话 还通顺吗?



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We have all experienced it when you park your car on a hot summer day. When you return to your vehicle, you open the door and immediately feel like you are in an oven. The inside is hot and uncomfortable. The seats are sticky and the steering wheel feels like it’s on fire. Not a pleasant way to enter your car.



The car cooler uses sunlight to keep your car cool when you are away. When you come back to your car, you’ll find it comfortable and cool!



How it works---Car cooler is a solar powered fan that keeps the interior of your car cool and fresh.



Installling is easy

Just roll down your window, please and car cooler on it, and roll it back up. The solar panel on the outside collects and uses the light to run the fan that's inside. The fan circulates the air inside and outside your car. It sucks out the hot air inside your car and replaces it with the cooler outside air.



Features:

Car cooler is a solar powered fan. Energy saving.
No battery is needed. Environment friendly.
Protects expensive leather seats from weakening.
Protects dashboard and interior.
Keeps valuable items safe from hot conditions.
Reduces air-conditioner use and fuel consumption.


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perfect

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谢谢,其实 我是 同事 地方 抄来的

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大体意思对,语法错误不少,有些词用的不规范。

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哪里 语法错误了啊

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求老师 指点

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please and car cooler on it 举例说明。please后边直接加and就不对严重错误。

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We all have such a experience,when you park your car in a hot summer day. When you return to your car, you open the door and you will feel as if you come to an oven suddenly. The inside is hot and uncomfortable. The seats are sticky and the steering wheel is going to be on fire. It is not pleasant to enter your car.


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我不喜欢挑刺。。。

an experience
另外,我感觉return这个词很别扭。

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8楼的翻译好棒!!!

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高手,求认识

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读起来有点别扭!鉴定完毕

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return 改为 back?

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首先说说第1段,我个人认为比较中式,如果是我,我大概会这么来:



We all have such an experience with car parking in the hot summertime, if the car is parking in an open space and is left under the sun for long, the car interiors will get hot, and it’s just like baking in an oven when you get in there, the doors, the seats, the wheel, it seems that everything is on fire!

个人意见。



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