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1．供应商单批次供货质量水平为电子元件≤2‰和结构件及包装材料≤2%，月批次合格率（LAR）电子料≥98%,结构料≥95%.
The level of the quality for the goods every batch is electronic element ≤2‰, structure element and packing material ≤2%;the eligibility rate (LAR) monthly every batch is electronic material≥98%, structure material≥95%.
2．乙方应积极配合甲方来改善自身的品质.如甲方向乙方提出品质改善要求,而乙方实际供货品质还未改善,甲方有权对乙方进行处罚,包括罚款,暂停供货,取消合格供应商资格等。
The supplier should improve the quality by cooperating with the buyer actively. If the buyer has requested the supplier to improve the quality, but the quality of the goods still has not been improved, the buyer is entitled to penalize the supplier, including penalty, pausing supplying and canceling the qualification of supplier,etc.
3．当乙方交货同一不良问题达到三批次时, 最高按该批货款的20倍给予赔偿.
When the same problem of the goods is finded three times, the supplier should compensate the buyer according the twenty of the payment for goods.
4．如超过30天乙方未处理的, 甲方将报废其乙方交货的产品.
If the problem is unsettled over 30 days, the buyer will discard the goods.
5．甲方每月会对乙方交货的产品质量进行统计评比,当乙方交货的产品月批次合格率没达到电子料的98%,结构料95%时.甲方将根椐情况对乙方进行处罚, 包括罚款,暂停供货等.连续三个月未达标者,取消合格供应商资格
The buyer will evaluate the quality of product made by the supplier monthly. If
the products don’t measure up by 98% of the electronic material and 95% of the structure material, the buyer will penalize the supplier accordingly, including penalty, pausing supplying ,etc. If the supplier doesn’t measure up three months continually, the qualification of the eligible supplier will be cancelled.
6．严重时甲方取消乙方供货资格.
When the problem is quite serious, the buyer is entitled to cancel the qualification of supplying goods.
其中，3．当乙方交货同一不良问题达到三批次时, 最高按该批货款的20倍给予赔偿.，我觉得特别别扭，20倍怎么说合适呢，还请福友们给点意见，谢谢！
[ 本帖最后由 kristy619 于 2010-10-12 16:02 编辑 ]
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