加拿大外贸
题记：由于我的英语欠佳，然后又想在外贸这个行业做出一些成绩，所以我得好好学习英语，现在我给自己定的目标是每天在这里写上一段话，也许会错误百出，也请各位福友帮忙改正。November 08th monday sunny
Our company is the manufactor of screw barre.And almost majority of people aslo are not familiar with my product.It is the samewith me.When i go to my company ,i don;t know what is this and my manager tell me the products is so specialty and it doesn't matter.so i begin my working.
now i have alreadly worked for 4 months and eight days,i have not recieved an order,i feel so upsite about this.From this sutiation, i even have the mind to quit.Even though i know to be an international sales,we should insist it and four months is not so long.some of my friends aslo suggest me not have the mind to quit my job and ought to insist on it.The important things of a sales,we must have the patience and could stand up to different presurre from boss,colleague and even my friends.When i heard my friends recieved one order,i will envy them and then compared with myself,why it doesn't me.so i think the pressure is so large to me and the boss will not give a good face to me.
This year i will insist on my products,if i don't have one order , i will quit and find a new job,maybe not a international sales.
All above is aslo speaking about my work.
now i want to speak somethings about our life.
yeah,we are graduate from school and now we are adult.but it not mean we should get married and we are only leaving school only 4 month.why the change is so big.I wonder.In the school,our teacher and parents don't fall in love and the love will make a bad impress on oour study.After graduated,our parents always ask us why you don't have a boyfrieds then they will let you to find someone.If not ,they will introduce one. why the change is so big and i even could not afford it.
the 80s people have the chance to fall in love,just because of the love,I want to ,i wonder if we have this ability.
No,we don't have the enough time.With someone two years,three years,or four years,no ,now we have so many time.so on my side,the phenomenon of flash marriage appear.I hate this .
what is my words.i don't know ,just want to speak.now i wll quit it and hope my english will be good and i aslo will work hard for it.
Frighting,Frigthing,celia.
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这英语确实………
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lz想要表达的意思我全都看得明白，但确实chinglish太重。
但也不用灰心，我们公司最大客户的老板是德国人，英语也很差，都是一个字一个字崩的，没有语法联系，
但不妨碍他挣大钱。加油！
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呃，虽然错误很多，但是也不要如此打击啊！
呵呵，我会加油的！
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谢谢你啊，能看完我的帖子，估计能看完就不错了，呵呵！
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November 08th Monday sunny
Our company is a manufacturer of screw barre.i think most people are not familiar with our products,so do I. When i go to the factory,. I feel very sad.i don't know much about the products. My manager told me not to care that because the products are very technical. So I began to work hard.
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我本来想再写的，但是我觉得楼主的英语词汇量并不少，缺乏的大量的熟读与背诵。英语最主要的不是单词多与少，而是词组与句型的学习。学语法并不是很明智的，作为学生学语法是为了提高成绩，但是作为职员要侧重于应用。其实无论是为了应付考试还是平时应用，多读多背多听都是最直接有效的学习语言的方法。英语和汉语一样，要多说才能说的更好。
如果为了回复邮件，可以看看外贸函电。学习上面的句子结构。写出来的句子就会更加简洁正确。
每天可以写一些，但是尽量要模仿，而不是这样自创。这样的句子老外很难理解，会影响你们的沟通。当沟通不畅时，客户就会考虑别的厂家了
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hehe,i will quit ,but not for no order,i have never met a boss like ours,she add my customers and send their mails,she even told me that it is none of your business when the customer paid for the advance payment,what else i can do ,she never told me how to fix a price,which is the basis for the international salers.i think i will quit this week or maybe next week^
you are more lucky than me,i never find a trust,go on ,my friend,everything will going on well with you .
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楼主要表达的意思,我已经明白, 呵呵, 加油
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hehe,i will quit ,but not for no order,i have never met a boss like ours,she add my customers and send their mails,she even told me that it is none of your business when the customer paid for the advance payment,what else i can do ,she never told me how to fix a price,which is the basis for the international salers.i think i will quit this week or maybe next week^
you are more lucky than me,i never find a trust,go on ,my friend,everything will going on well with you .
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hello
i think you are in a factory, the same as me two years before.
i advise you stay there a little longer, for more products information.
If you don't know much about the products, you cannot do better when you go to an foreign trade company.
About quote, you can learn by yourselves on books and the documents in ''http://bbs.shanghai.com/''.
Believe yourself, you can do it better.
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Sorry 没想打击你的。呵呵
我帮你改一部分，你看看有没有好点：
My company is a manufacturer of screw barre. I guess most of people are unfamiliar about this item, and so do i. When i joined this company, i totally have no idea about our products, which my manager says it's a common practice since our products are so special.
Now i 've alreadly worked for 4 months plus eight days and haven't got any order yet. It's so frustrating that some times i even thought of quiting. I know as international sales, we should be patient and four months is actually not that long. Some friends also suggest that i should stay where i am. But everytime when i heard they got a new order, i feel pretty jealous. Why, i was wondering, it's not me who get the order? The pressure is so huge that i assume my boss will show me black face.
改到这里才发现真的好长
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believe yourself, come on!
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from now ,i will learn to listen english songs and read books.
I aslo feel that i don't work hard for a sales.
so work hard is the most important things.
no work,no success.
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