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Dear Sir or Madam,

Thanks for your inquiry, we are pleased to hear that you are interested in our **products.

We are MANUFACTURER of **more than 8 years, markets cover to North America, Australia, Middle East , Asia and so on.

**offered you with VERY VERY competitive price and good quality, please check attached files to know more.

We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
**
太乏味了,没有吸引力。但我英语基础不太好,哪位大侠给我改改。

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Dear Sir or Madam [Good morning],

Thanks for your inquiry, [.] w[W]e are pleased to hear that you are interested in our **products.

We are [a] MANUFACTURER of ** [for]more than 8 years,[.] [Our] markets cover {to} North America, Australia, Middle East , Asia and so on.

**offered you with {VERY} VERY competitive price and good quality, please check attached files to know [learn] more.

We are [I'm] looking forward to hearing from you {soon}.

Best regards,
**
Well, I hope you like it...

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在上搜开发信,有狠多可以参考的
尽量不要带附件

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可以去这个精华帖看看:(原创)新手如何写好开发信,加大成交率?--附上老外的建议和成交案例

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Thanks for your kind  inquiry dated ****.  we are so pleased to hear that you are interested in our **products. Undoubtly,you have a rather visiable mind.

Having been a  MANUFACTURER of **more than 8 years, our markets cover North America, Australia, Middle East , Asia,especially popular in your neighbouring countries.

**offered you with VERY competitive price and good quality, please check attached files and let us learn more about your order in detail.  

Your prompet reply will be highly appreciated.

Best regards,
**
(FYI)

[ 本帖最后由 0081536 于 2011-4-17 22:09 编辑 ]

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for your interest in our line of xxxxx products.  

Please review attached files for product price and delivery information.  I am offering very competitive prices for the quality which our customers in xxxxx {country/region where customer inquiry from} usually require.  

Our company has been manufacturing xxxx products since 2003.  We mainly ship to customers in North America, Europe, Australia, and South East Asia. {include area where your customer inquiry is from!}  We can customize our product quality and packaging to meet your quality and/or target price requirements.  

I look forward to receiving your feedback, so that I can prepare a tailor-made best offer for you based on your proposed order.

Best regards,

希望有多一点味儿。

[ 本帖最后由 咖啡狂 于 2011-4-17 23:43 编辑 ]

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楼上的发言都很精彩

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不是开发信吗?怎么还谢谢询盘啊?
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