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这是我写的公司简介，希望大家多多指点，感谢！XXX Co., Ltd., which was established in Zhongshan city, Guangdong province in 2001, is a modern professional wooden furniture paint manufacturer specializing in the producing of PE, PU and UV paint, with annual production capacity of 50.000 tons, owning 30,000 square meter ecological, standard plant and modern office building. Through the past few years’ development and growth, XXX now is a strong modern high-tech wooden furniture paint producer, all in one with development, research, production and sales, selling the products throughout China. Through so many years development, XXX has attached the whole coating industry’s attention for its achievement. Especially in PE paint field, XXX breaks the technical ice that bothers the industry many years, gaining the honor as “Technical leader of PE paint”.
With the help of advanced production facilities such as automatic thermostatic PE production line, sanding machine, disperser, packing machine, and through the academic exchange and technical cooperation with American DuPont, Dow corning, German Bayer, Cognis, Switzerland Ciba, Taiwan Changxing chemical companies etc, XXX is approaching its unremitting pursue goal that is to innovate PE paint and other wooden furniture paint technologies, to build wealth for customers and to create value for the society.
XXX, as an ISO9001 certified and CCC certified company, have been recognized by government and society, gaining the honor and reputation as “Enterprise of Abiding by Contrast and Being Trustworthy” and “District R&D Center”. Doit has a 50 people R&D team, which accounts for 20 percent of the entire staff. The 2500 square meter R&D center, which contains 10 professional R&D laboratory, 12 products’ quality testing lines, 15 testing booths and other most advanced testing and research equipments in China, provides the team the superior R&D platform, enabling XXX to launch new products every month and to solve the technical problems every year.XXXwill continue to promote value by scientific and technical innovation and to construct the core competitiveness by research and development.
XXX attaches great importance to quality control and firmly believe that the quality is the life of an enterprise. To achieve this goal, XXXbuilds sophisticated manufacturing management system, implementing 6S, TQM production control, ERP and OA office software resource sharing, making sure every step under control and work efficiency.
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文章太长，不合格。老外怎么怎么可能花几分钟看你的中式英语？
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告诉客户你们是干什么的；可以为客户提供什么；你们的优势在哪里，就可以了，其他的不必多说，说了也没用
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中文不给，你如果英文是错的，怎么帮你纠正呀？
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LZ明显是在给网站宣传做公司简介，难道一个明眼人都没有.....
会的就帮忙优化一下行了，大家顺便学习学习~
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太长了。。。有些说了也没用，只要说出和其他同类企业相比，你们公司的竞争力在哪！
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感觉楼主的英语写作功底好好哦，都是很复杂的句式呢。整体性把握的很好。我对你们油漆行业的东西不是很懂啦。只是觉得有个把词可能用的不是很合适。还有这个Enterprise of Abiding by Contrast and Being Trustworthy，这个是什么意思啊，不太明白呢
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哥们，太佩服你了，这么多人，你就说到点子上了。我在帮公司编辑英文网站啦，所以希望富友们帮忙改改错误，建议有没有更地道的词汇和表达！谢谢你的支持！
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Enterprise of Abiding by Contrast and Being Trust ... [/quote]的意思是守合同重信用企业
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如果我是客户的话，我看都不会看，直接删掉了……希望你以后邮件写完之后，再以客户的角色去看下你的邮件。
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你好，我都说了，这不是开发信，这是我司网站公司简介！晕啊
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实在太长了，看到这么长就没兴趣看了……
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告诉客户你们是干什么的；可以为客户提供什么；你们的优势在哪里，就可以了，其他的不必多说，说了也没用
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守合同重信用企业？国外根本就没有这种说法
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