加拿大外贸
以下下的英文部分是我自己翻译的，但是产品介绍的那个因为中文写得太有诗意了，翻译不下去了。哪位大虾帮我下啊，帮我看看我翻译的哪里需要改进的，没翻译的那些帮我翻译下，谢谢啦。
（公司介绍）
广州舒源箱包有限公司位于广州珠江明珠的小蛮腰电视塔附近的赤岗粤信广场，公司的背景是以广州著名的批发市场万菱广场开档口的销售模式转变过来的公司，在花都狮岭有自己的生产基地和新产品的开发系统，工厂创立于2003年，是一家专业生产各式女士钱包、手提包、手机包、钥匙包、化妆包、挂包、背包、胸包、妈咪包、卡通包、购物袋等的厂家，工厂秉承“顾客至上，锐意进取”的经营理念，坚持“质量第一”的原则为广大客户提供优质的产品，产品质量合格，做工精美，款式时尚，目前产品已销往国外，款式达到200多种，有成熟的销售平台，公司的成立将意味着进一步的加大产品的开发力度，变被动的档口销售模式转变为主动的公司进攻性销售模式，加大国外市场的开拓力度，打造完全属于自我知识产权的品牌，目前正在开发一个新型的运动保健型产品，在注册专利后即将投放市场，将给公司注入新的活力和良好的发展前景。
Guangzhou suyan bag CO.,LTD. is located in Chigang Yuexin Square near from the Guangzhou TV tower in Zhujiang Guangzhou. Company as before is a sales booth in the famous wholesale market – Wanling Square, and now is a trading company. The company has its own exploitation system and factory in Huadu Guangzhou. The factory was founded in 2003, it is professional at ladies purse, tote bag, cell phone case, key chain purse, cosmetic bag, shoulder bag, backpack, chest pack, diaper bag, cartoon bag, shopping bag std. We adhere to “customer first, forge ahead and quality first” to supply customer best products with good quality, exquisite works and fashion style. And the products are saled all over the sea. We have more that 200 designs, ful-blown sales platform. The foundation of the company means the growing of developing ability. We exchange the passive booth sales to forwardly company trade. We develop the oversea maket, and make our own brand. We are now studying at a new type of sports health care products, we will put them into market after registered patent. And this is going to give our company new vitality and good development prospect.
（产品系列描述）（以下是我昨天补充的）
单肩皮包 香醇女人味
单肩手提包 从漫画走出来的女孩，走进漫画的心情放松与闲适。
单肩斜跨包 时尚浪漫，青春活泼的风格搭配，使整个人看起来与众不同，闪耀亮丽的光芒
单肩斜跨皮包 喜欢不需要理由，给你全新的视觉感受
环保袋 让时尚随着绿色购物动起来
钱包 简约干练，演绎复古风潮
三链小单肩斜挎包 唯细节 动人心 三链拉扣 与包身完美结合
三用途包 一包多用，简约时尚
时尚钱包 清爽色调 淡雅 小巧时尚钱包
手机包 让手机徜徉在童话的世界
手提包 民族风覆盖 使主人凸显神秘意味
手提斜跨皮包 女人也有她狂野，激情的一面
双肩包 love style 这就是你的风格
相机包 相机也可以活出不一样的姿态
小手提 什么是新潮，拥有它，让它告诉你
小斜挎包 让你拥有时尚简约欧美范儿
斜肩包 包包上的图案就好比一个个故事，通过包包传达给人们
腰包 时尚的外在，实用的内在
化妆包 喜欢那一刻得性感与妖娆
零钱包 百变风情，由你主宰
旅行包 旅行就是要生动
手提包2 简约 精致 打造不一样的效果
Shoulder Leather Bag Mellow feminine
Shoulder Handbag Walk out from comics, girls walk into the relax and lasure of comics
Shoulder Messenger Bag Fashion, romantic, yong and lively, you look different, shining and bright
Shoulder Messenger Leather Bag You don’t need any reason to like it, it will bring you a new visual experience
Green Bag Geen shopping, fashion follows
Wallet Simple and capable deduce retro wave
Three zippers shoulder messenger bag Details move you, three zippers match the main pocket perfectly
Three uses bag One bag, three uses, simple and fashion
Fashion purse Fashion purse with fresh elegant color
Cell phone case Let your cell phone stroll in fairy tale
Tote bag It makes you mystery with SalvatoreFerragamo
Tote messenger leather bag Women have the side of wild and passion
Backpack Love style is your style
Camera bag Camera also has its different attitude life
Small Tote What is the fashion, have it, and it will tell you
Small messenger bag Fashion and simple Europe fan
Oblique pack The patterns on the bag are stories to tell you are different
Waist pack Fashion outside, applied inside
Cosmetic bag Like the sexy and enchanting at that moment
Change pocket You control variety style
Travel bag Traveling needs vivid
Tote bag 2 Simple and exquisite make you different
[ 本帖最后由 clerry 于 2011-10-8 10:21 编辑 ]
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厄 不会是有打广告嫌疑吧 因为公司招了我进来后才打算开始做外贸， 现在外贸部也就我一个，所有的都必须从零开始，这些初步的东西一定要做好的。。。。真不是打广告
各位高手帮帮忙吧
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你这太多人，谁有这闲工夫啊
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located in Chigang Yuexin Square next to the Guangzhou TV tower in Zhujiang, Guangzhou city , Guangzhou shuyan bags CO.,LTD has inherited the former sales pattern as a sales booth in the famous wholesale market - Wanling Square, and now is developed into a trading company. owning its R&D department and factory in Huadu Guangzhou. The factory was founded in 2003 and specialized in the production of lady purse, tote bag, cell phone case, key chain purse, cosmetic bag, shoulder bag, backpack, chest pack, diaper bag, cartoon bag and shopping bag std etc. Guided by the business policy of “customer first, forge ahead and the principle of ” quality first”we are determined to to supply quality goods. Thanks to the superior quality, exquisite workmanship and fashionable style, our products have gained more and more market shares internationally. currently, we have more than 200 designs and mature sales platform have already been established. The foundation of the company will further promote the R&D of our products and transform the passive booth sales into an active and enterprising sales pattern.More efforts has also been made by our company to build our own brand to further open up the international market. We are now developing a new type of sports health-oriented products, which we believe will add new vitality and sound development prospect to our company when they are put into market after register in patent office
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谢谢你，比我翻译的通顺多了，准备用你的版本
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