加拿大外贸
我是销售缝纫机上的LED灯的，最近刚参加上海的CISMA回来，收到了很多名片，现在的首要任务就是给客户发邮件，可是不知道要怎么写才能写的好，请各位指点下吧 ~用自己的方式写了发过去都没有效果，太差劲了，呵呵，可以帮我指点下吗？标题是：
Best price of LED lamps and laser lamps
正文如下：
Dear Recep EFE
Glad to see you at CISMA fair.
I am sandy work for WENZHOU JIAWEN SEWING EQUIPMENT INDUSTRIAL &TRADE CO., LTD,
Our factory are specialized in the production of LED lights and laser lights.
If you want to buy them,please contact with us by this email.We will give you the best price and the unit price of A1 is usd 2.8.
Waiting for your reply ASAP.
Best regards
sandy
[ 本帖最后由 四色依米 于 2011-10-22 14:04 编辑 ]
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Sewing machines' LED with Reasonable price From JiaWen
Dear XXX:
I got your email address at CISMA fair on Xth of X(DATE).
This is Sandy from WenZhou JiaWen Sewing Equipment Industrial & Trade Co., Ltd.
Our factory are specialized in the production of LED lights and laser lights for X years.
Please feel free to let me know if you need a free sample.
After that I will surely give you the best price.
Waiting for your reply ASAP.
Best regards
sandy
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Dear Sir,
This is Sandy wark in Wenzhou Jiawen Sewing Equipment Industrial and Trade Co.,ltd.
I knew your e-mail address and contact details at CISMA fair. It's my pleasure to regonize you.
Our factory are specialized in the production of LED lights and laser lights. Please don't heasite to contact me if you are interest in our product and we will quote the best favorate price for you.
Your prompt reply is highly appreciated.
Best regards
sandy
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Hi xxx,
Good day. Again, Sandy back with you.
Attached please see xxx for your convenience as per discussion at Shanghai CISMA fair. Please check and feedback to us with your valued comments. We'll see how to do better for you.
Thanks & B.Rgds.
xxxx
[ 本帖最后由 Superhero 于 2011-10-22 13:45 编辑 ]
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上面这两封都还不错，小小的建议是用最简单的语言表达好意思，这是客户最喜欢的。
另外，发这样的信，最好还是应该发彩图，产品的彩图目录，清晰明了，问客户喜欢哪一款在给他相应的合理报价。
加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards ......................................... 加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光
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