加拿大进出口外贸帮忙修改下翻译~~



加拿大外贸

A齿轮箱有限公司创建于1984年,是一家专业生产中,高档齿轮以齿轮箱的机械加工企业,主要生产船用齿轮箱,柴油机,机床,装载机,纺机,拖拉机,汽车等配套的各种齿轮。近几年来,随着生产的发展,公司结合自身优势和国内外市场对传动机械的需求,开发和生产各种系列的齿轮减速电动机,机床变速箱,工程机械传动齿轮箱,旋耕机齿轮箱等,是一家从事制造机械传动产品的专业性生产厂家。
    A bearbox co.,ltd was founded in 1984,which is a mechanical processing enterprise specialized in production of medium-end and
high-end gears and gear boxes.The company is mainly involved in production of marine gearboxes and gears provided for diesel engines,
machine tools, loading machines,textile machinery,tractors, and automobiles, etc. In recent years,with the growth of production and in
combination with its own advantage and the demand for transmission machinery from domestic and international market, developed and
manufactured series of geared speed-reducing motors ,machine tool transmission,construction machinery transmission gear boxes,rotary tiller gear boxes etc.

多年来,公司朝着专业化,高精度方向发展,努力开发国内外市场,提高品质,服务顾客,不断创新,创造传动领域光辉未来。我们真诚与客户合作,热忱欢迎新老客户光临惠顾。
   Over the years, the company has been working toward professionalism,the high accuracy,striving for the development of domestic market as well as overseas market,improving the quality and customer service,keepig innovation to create a brilliant future of transmission field. We sincerely hope to cooperate with clients, and warmly welcome all the new and regular customers to our factory.

[ 本帖最后由 金鹰齿轮箱 于 2011-11-8 16:03 编辑 ]

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这里人气应该不错吧~求助

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可以 翻译的不错啊,,,

要我翻译不出来这么好 楼主专业;P ;P

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说说我的拙见。公司结合自身优势用With Our Own Advantages更地道吧。而且优势拼错了。。。当然,小问题。
另外最后一句是不是看着有些别扭?自己可以填两个词让句子通顺些。不妨改成We sincerely HOPE TO cooperate with clients,AND ALWAYS warmly welcome all customers to our factory.是不是更通顺些呢?楼主不妨考虑一下

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通篇专业词语过多,难于把握。现仅从中抽取一两句作语法上修改,供楼主参考。
1, “A bearbox co.,ltd is founded in 1984,”此句是过去时,应改为:“A bearbox co.,ltd  was founded in 1984”。
2,“Over the years, the company towards professional,the high accuracy,developing the market of both here and abroad,improving the quality and customer service,keepig innovation,and to create a brilliant future of transmission field.”此长句缺少谓语(toward是介词,不能作谓语),应适当增加动词,如改为:“Over the years, the company has been working towards professional,the high accuracy,developing the market of both here and abroad,improving the quality and customer service,keepig innovation,and to create a brilliant future of transmission field.”

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多谢各位,看来是要慢慢改进~~

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很多专业词我也不知道对不对~~

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主要是前面用了WITH开头,所以换了个词,后面的改过来了

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怎么就成已解决了?这都还没改好~~

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A齿轮箱有限公司创建于1984年,是一家专业生产中,高档齿轮以齿轮箱的机械加工企业,主要生产船用齿轮箱,柴油机,机床,装载机,纺机,拖拉机,汽车等配套的各种齿轮。近几年来,随着生产的发展,公司结合自身优势和国内外市场对传动机械的需求,开发和生产各种系列的齿轮减速电动机,机床变速箱,工程机械传动齿轮箱,旋耕机齿轮箱等,是一家从事制造机械传动产品的专业性生产厂家。
    A bearbox co.,ltd is a professional machining company founded in 1984, specializing in the production of medium-end and high-end gears and gear boxes.The company is mainly involved in the production of marine gearboxes and various gears provided for diesel engines,machine tools,loading machines,textile machinery,tractors and automobiles, etc. In recent years,with the growth of production and in combination with its own advantage and the
demand for transmission machinery from domestic and international market, the Company has developed and manufactured various series of geared speed-reducing motors,machine tool transmission,construction machinery transmission gear boxes and rotary tiller gear box etc.
多年来,公司朝着专业化,高精度方向发展,努力开发国内外市场,提高品质,服务顾客,不断创新,创造传动领域光辉未来。我们真诚与客户合作,热忱欢迎新老客户光临惠顾。
   Over the years, the company has been working towards professionalism and high accuracy,striving for the development of domestic market as well as overseas market,improving the quality and customer service, keeping innovating to create a brilliant future of transmissions. We sincerely hope to cooperate with clients, and warmly welcome all the new and regular customers to our factory.

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正在研究LZ上的翻译,TKS

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果然比我的好多了

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还需要改进~~

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中饭吃完~~~~~~
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