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hello,everyone, my name is candy.today rain is very very big weather is very very cold ,i need tow clothes can some warm,backatthefarm
today teacher ask for me write diary is about "my dream "
i have a big dream i want to be a beggar ,but it's a rich beggar . please give me g large beg ,and a pair of sunglasses and a sun hat. i will travel the word . i can take photograph with cows every day. i can eat fish .i'll catch fish by myself and i can sleep on the grass. i can stay with sheep
but ,my father tell me :"you are dreaming in the day"
呵呵，我现在在学英语，小小日志，大家帮我点评一下，是否有语法错误！有些单词跟句子我不会写，是用有道翻译出来的！
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有点儿意思，通俗易懂啊。
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大小写不区分；意思表达不清晰，中式英语。。。问题蛮多的，想学英语要下功夫啊。。。
It is very cold today and the rain is very heavy. I have to wear very heavy clothes to keep warm when I came back from the farm.
Today my teacher asked me to write a diary with the topic my dream(斜体表示题目，我这斜体不了).
I have a great dream which is to be a beggar who is a rich beggar I'd like a big bag, a pair of sunglasses and a sunshade hat. I want to travel around the word and take photos with cows every day and I can eat fish that is caught by myself, and I would like to sleep on the grass. I can stay with sheep.
But my father said:"You are daydreaming baby."
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呵呵，这个英语很多地方有错误哦，最简单的world都写成word了，最大的问题就是中式英语，且句不成句，哈哈，你可以和我交流下哈
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嗯 虽然语句很多错误 但有勇气写出来也是个好的开始 刚开始都是这样的 别急，慢慢来 能学起来的。
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严重怀疑楼主是来搞笑的，支持的顶。
Good good study,day day up.
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跟了说了多少遍，东成西就不要没事就翻出来看，会出事的。。
long long ago ,when i was very very young ,my father told me ...
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太有意思了 不过我的水平也只有如此。。求师傅啊。。。
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写得很流畅，读起来很舒服
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big rain........
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keep working hard on ur englsh.......
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chinenglish ........太严重。
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good good study day day up
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不错，很流畅，河南的就是底子深厚啊！
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。。。。。。楼主，慢慢来吧。语序颠倒，语法混乱，不过勇气可嘉。会好起来的，不要太着急
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