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下面几句翻译，需要印在产品手册上，请大家帮忙润色下，谢谢先！1.能改变光缆内部油性析氢现象，提高光缆组成部分的接合力，改善活塞效应；
Changing Cable internal oily hydrogen evolution phenomenon, improve bonding force between all cable components and improve piston effect;
2.能避免成缆或塑模具对光纤束管的挤压，降低次品率；
To avoid extrusion from finished cable/plastic mold on optical fiber bundle tube, and reduce defective rate.
3.纱的应用可较大幅度的降低缆的外径重量和成本，可制造优质的低成本防鼠光缆；
Using yarn can much reduce cable diameter, weight and cost, to manufacture high quality low cost rat proof optical fibre cable.
4.纱的应用可生产出有特殊要求的阻水型室内软光缆；
Yarn be used for producing special requirements of water blocking indoor soft optical fibre cable.
5.体积小、不吸潮、耐高温；
Small size, No absorption of moisture, high temperature resistance
就这么多，谢谢大家先！
[ 本帖最后由 Namiko-zs 于 2011-12-7 14:10 编辑 ]
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我就说几个单词的建议好了
第一句改变，提高，改善
improve, enhance,lessen
第二句，挤压
squeeze
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还有一个建议是最好统一，要不用ING形式开头，要不用To+原形开头，混着用看着有点乱
FYI
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谢谢版主！
大家能帮我在具体润色下吗？
因为要用在产品样册上，所以语法肯定要没问题，另外表达能否更精简？更准确？
谢谢大家先了！
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1.It can change internal oily formation of hydrogen phenomenon of cable,improve bonding force between all cable components and improve piston effect
2.It can avoid extrusion on optical fiber bundle tube from finished cable/plastic mold and defective rate.
3.To use yarn can heavily reduce outer diameter of cable,weight and cost,which make us manufacture high quality rat proof optical fibre cable with low cost.
4.To use yarn can make us manufacture water blocking indoor soft optical fibre cable wich can meet special requirements.
5.Small volume,no moisture absorption,high temperature resistance
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that is seems better
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