加拿大外贸
Dear Mrs Kawkab Zaouk,This is Ivan Wang ................China.
We are very glad to receive your e-mail and cooperate with you.
Thank you very much for your interest in our products.Please see the attachment, two pictures in it. The design for xxx,fabric is CVC 80/20 240gsm velour one romper+one hat. This product we are going on and production cycle is twenty days. If you interest we can arrange production.
Our minimum order quality is 2000units.
If you have other questions,please feel free contact me.
Regards
Ivan
[ 本帖最后由 四色依米 于 2011-12-29 11:22 编辑 ]
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不知道你省略号里还有多少没写的。、、总之太长了。
This is Ivan wang ... ..We are very glad to receive your e-mail
Please see the attachment with two pictures.
The design for xxx,
Material : fabric CVC 80/20 240gsm velour one romper+one hat
Delivery Time: 20days
MOQ 2000 Units,Price : xxxx FOB XXX
If you have other questions,please feel free contact me.
[ 本帖最后由 前度李郎今又来 于 2011-12-28 19:53 编辑 ]
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省略号只是我们的公司名字。。。。 delivery time 是交期吧 我的意思是生产周期
总觉得我写的太不专业了，怎么才能写好呢
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报价是你是直接写到邮件里 还是有一个另外的报价附件呢。？
做一个表格 把所有的东西列出来也可以。
直接写在邮件内容里的话，最好是一项一项的 1234 列下来。
分条理的。。这样比较容易看。
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恩恩，谢啦。我知道啦。老板让我写这邮件是让我做练习的，我刚实习 有很多不懂得。。。以后多多帮忙哈
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This is Ivan Wang ................China.
We are very glad to receive your e-mail and expecting to cooperate with you.
Thank you very much for your interest in our products.Please refer to the attachments. The design for xxx,fabric is CVC 80/20 240gsm velour one romper+one hat. This product we are going on and production cycle is twenty days. Under your requirement we can arrange production.
The minimum order quality is 2000units.
If you have other questions,please feel free to contact me.
what is that "going on" and production cycle"?
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简要评述：
1、不用告诉客人你叫XXX，你公司叫XXX了，这些东西在签名处注明OK了。
2、整体内容调整和缩短一下。
3、注意句子的精炼。
根据邮件内容的暗示，个人建议修改如下：
Dear xxxx,
Thanks for your equirey. Attached please see design of the product you mentioned. Regarding issues of production cycle and MOQ, please see below as our reply:
1)Production cycle: 20days.
2)MOQ:2000unit/order.
We look forward to your valued comments.
Thanks & B.Rgds.
xxx
[ 本帖最后由 Superhero 于 2011-12-29 12:43 编辑 ]
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going on 就是说我们的产品还在生产当中 production cycle 生产周期
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thanks~~
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