加拿大进出口外贸求助各位高手帮我看下以下电邮应该如何更改



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Dear Melanie:
Regards this sample  ,unfortunately, I cann't reply to you sample date. as you know for your comment ,it will change the underbust elastic and we cann't received the change  elastic at this time that also not arrange the sample .pls noted it .
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On the other hand,For the this order Delievery time. we will not normal delivery if also as this progress at this time, Because you need change the elastic quality that we will cann't purchase the elastic material,and it will also delay the Delievery time.I hope you understand it.
If you have any question pls free feel let me know.
Best regards and hope you have a nice day.
SUKI
第一段就是:关于这个样办,很不增,我我无法回复你样办期.正如你所知道,评语里有改变了丈巾,并我们到现在也没有收到改良的丈巾.所以我们无法安排做此样.办.
第二段:另外:这个款的货期,如果按照这个进度我们将无法正常交货.因为你改变了丈巾的质量,正因如此,我们也无法订购丈巾.所以导致货期将延期.

[ 本帖最后由 四色依米 于 2012-2-17 22:33 编辑 ]

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提点个人的意见,我觉得你应该给个预估的交办时间,及大货的交期,不然客人还得再问一次。

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嗯,多谢你的宝贵意见,我感觉我的英语上在语法里面是有问题的,你能否帮我修改.并提出你的意见呢

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Regarding the sample, I'm sorry that we could not reply you exact lead time now. It is because changes required in your comment, but we still not received improved underbust elastic. therefore, sample could not be arranged.

On the other hand, lead time of mass products could not be kept per such out-of-time process. Since quality of the elastic changed. Corresponding material is hard to be get in our hands in time, and result in delay of lead time.

请忽略我的拼写错误啥的,我困了。。。呜

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About the delivery of the sample, sorry but the exact finish time could not be suggested till now, because the improved underbust elastic based on your comments haven't been received yet..


第二段:另外:这个款的货期,如果按照这个进度我们将无法正常交货.因为你改变了丈巾的质量,正因如此,我们也无法订购丈巾.所以导致货期将延期.


Besides, the delivery of this style won't be on time as confirmed before, as the quality changed as you required, so we have to re-order, which makes the delivery time delayed accordingly.


FYI

[ 本帖最后由 Namiko-zs 于 2012-2-17 09:57 编辑 ]

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非常感谢你的宝贵意思和完美的修改.
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