加拿大外贸
由于我们生产很紧，客户的订单被排到很后面了，现回复客户交货期的邮件如下,大家提提意见，看怎样写比较好，语气比较委婉（该客户之前很多单子表面上很急，赶出来后又不发）Hi **,
It will be ready next week earlist,is it ok for you?
But if you are able to confirmed the delivery way in advance, may be we can arrange this order earlier.
Since our work load is heavy, our production department has to proceed those goods first, which have confirmed delivery date & delivery way to us.
Pls kindly confirm above.
Thank you.
在这先谢谢大家咯
[ 本帖最后由 yuleyoung 于 2010-4-10 14:03 编辑 ]
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给你个最委婉的
As our sincere and supportive client, you order will be ready next week.
We could have been pleased to inform that your order would be ready earlier if you had
kindly notified your way of delivery in advance in favor of our arrangement for mass production.
Thus, orders with firm shipment and date at the soonest must be granted the priority due to our tight production shcedule.
And we surely will try our efforts to reduce the lead time. Thank you for your kind understanding.
板上钉钉的事要明确的告诉他，下周备好货，不然他会以为可以改，那样你就麻烦了。
这句子我自己看了都觉得真TM委婉。
FYI
[ 本帖最后由 Namiko-zs 于 2012-5-8 08:03 编辑 ]
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Since our work load is heavy, our production department has to proceed those goods first, which have confirmed delivery date & delivery way to us.
这段话看上去有点怪怪的~
二楼的不错 精华~~~
[ 本帖最后由 sabrina0605 于 2010-3-12 08:13 编辑 ]
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我觉得你要是说安排上还可以调，客人肯定更愿意你帮他们调前
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我也来看看。。。。。
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学习学习...
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回复才能看！
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学习学习 不错 不错
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学习啦 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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为了看看2楼说什么，我回帖来了。
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看2楼的精华帖来l了！
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What is for lunch today?
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Wind
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为看2L回帖
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2 L's message arrest my attention, I must make it clear
加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光 加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards .........................................
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