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英语新手，请看看翻译的英文，哪里不对，怎么改啊我们产品的最小订单量为5套，
鉴于我们初次合作，你可以先订购2套或者1套都可以。
如果你觉得我们的产品在价格和质量上都有竞争力的话，我们可以再扩大合作。
The product minimum order quantity is 5 sets,
In view of our first cooperation, you can order 2 sets or 1 set, you are welcome.
If our products are competitive in price and quality, you can expand cooperation with us.
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如果你觉得我们的产品在价格和质量上都有竞争力的话，我们可以再扩大合作。
If you feel like the quality of our products in price and quality are competitive, we can expand the cooperation.
可以看看我这句。
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以下为符合外国人阅读习惯的意译
我们产品的最小订单量为5套
In general, we only accept orders for 5 sets or more.
鉴于我们初次合作，你可以先订购2套或者1套都可以。
But to show our appreciation for your business, we are more than happy to make a one-time exception by dropping the minimum — you are more than welcome to place an order for 2 or even 1 set this time.
如果你觉得我们的产品在价格和质量上都有竞争力的话，我们可以再扩大合作。
If you find our products competitive both in terms of quality and in terms of price, we will certainly be more than happy to accommodate larger orders.
"扩大合作"是一个很中式的概念，不能直接翻译。
[ 本帖最后由 ZXZ贸易 于 2012-6-25 10:02 编辑 ]
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