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对于此次样品出现的故障给你们带来的不便，我们深表歉意！请将样品退回给我们，我们将做详细的检测，找出问题所在并加以改进。请将样品准备好，我们会安排DHL上门取件,谢谢。这是我们量产的标准产品，品质非常稳定可靠，在欧洲的销售非常大，主要应用于KIOSK和JUEBOX行业,防水等级达到IP65，客户反馈非常好。我们收到退回的样品后会重新给你们发免费样品，请再次测试，谢谢！
We are sorry for the inconvenience by sample fault. Please send sample return to us, we will do a detailed inspection, find out the problem and improved. Please prepared the sample, we will arrange pick up the goods from our company,thank you.
This is our production standard products, the quality is stable and reliable, and in Europe sales is very large, mainly applies in the KIOSK and JUEBOX industry, waterproof level IP65, customer feedback is very good. After we receive the returned sample going to send you a new free sample, please test again, thank you!
[ 本帖最后由 Bonnie098 于 2012-11-7 22:29 编辑 ]
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Please send sample return to us, we will do a detailed inspection, find out the problem and improved. Please prepared the sample, we will arrange pick up the goods from our company,thank you.
这里，没说DHL
Please get the sample ready for shipping, we will contact DHL for picking up soon.
This is our production standard products, the quality is stable and reliable, and in Europe sales is very large, mainly applies in the KIOSK and JUEBOX industry, waterproof level IP65, customer feedback is very good.
这里，看了让人有点生气
After we receive the returned sample going to send you a new free sample, please test again, thank you!
改成这样吧：
Once the defective sample is arrived, we will ship another free sample to you for testing.
Thank you.
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直接翻译过来了，有些单词也用上了，但我觉得跟我的翻译习惯不一样。比方说我会说widely used in ... very popular in EU..We'll send new samples to you at our account. 个人习惯问题吧
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楼主你这是直译的，肯定不行，因为本身你的样品都有问题了，现在要重新送样，肯定要比较委婉客气点啊
还是让高手们帮你修改修改吧。
祝愿你好运，也希望高手们能奉献爱心，好人好报，呵呵。
帮你顶。。。。
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谢谢大家。
各位老师，帮帮我啊，谢谢。
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对于此次样品出现的故障给你们带来的不便，我们深表歉意！请将样品退回给我们，我们将做详细的检测，找出问题所在并加以改进。请将样品准备好，我们会安排DHL上门取件,谢谢。
We must apologize for the sample breakdown and bring you inconvenience. Please return the sample to us, and we will do a specific detail inspection for improvement. We will arrange DHL pick up when you are ready.
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高手们，怎么都是一段一段的翻译啊，来个完整的啊，让我们菜鸟级别的也学习学习啊。
呵呵，出手的朋友，你们马上就会接大订单哦，我给你们祈祷，好人有好报的，哈哈。。。。。。
帮楼主顶贴。
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我想要大订单，但我英语也菜.......
帮顶贴
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各位老师帮帮小妹啊
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LZ ，我感觉你的中式思维也挺重 之前我写给一个做外贸了八九年的朋友 他也说我写得中式
现在我正在学那种比较地道的写法。
（We feel so sorry that a lot inconvenience with this sampling caused by us .Could we have them back so that we can make a specific inspection and figure out what seems to be the problem ?we will cotact DHL to pick it up if you aggree.)
(The model is a standard one with stable quality .Have been selling very well in Europe market .Such as KIOSK and JUEBOX .IP65 in Waterproof leaver that our customers are very impressed with it as its good function/quality .We will be sending you a new sample for free after receiving your sample . Thanks)
Please prepared the sample，prepared 过去式？problem and improved.(improved?)
we will arrange pick up the goods from our company,thank you( arrange pick up ,这里有两个谓语了 ，那就加个to吧）
这些比较明显的 说错勿怪 大家学习学习
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谢谢指点，谢谢。。。
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LZ的太中式话，基本是直译的。
要知道，直译老外很可能看不懂哦。
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you have our sincere apology for the inconvenience because of the sample problem .Pls send back the sample to us , so that we can find out the reason after further test and we will improve the sample , also we can make a new one for your approval if necessary.
we will arrange DHL express to get the sample , just let me konw when it's ready!
This is our main product , and in the European market , the quantity demanded is very large. it mainly applies in KIOSK and JUEBOX industry. this product‘waterproof level is IP65 and we got very good feedback from our clients ,so we believe this time the sample problem is caused by some factor that can be settled soon. I hope you can give us another chance for the new sample. and we will guarantee the quality. ths very much!!
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事儿说明白就行了，英语慢慢会好的。样品都出问题，而且出了问题好几天，还不给个信儿，你说你这是什么个意思？
样品发出去之间不检查的？
我们对不住啊，we sorry，we whole family sorry，把破的还回来我们给你好的，实际上不就一句话吗？
Dear xxx
Please accept our sincerely apology for all the inconvenience. Another free sample is going to be shipped out soon. Please return the defective sample, and we will contact DHL for picking up. All the shipping fee is on us.
The sample was picked up randomly among actual products from the manufacture line. We are NOT sure the issue is related to the shipping of the sample or production, so we need to run a full test on the defective sample and find it out. The XXX is very popular in Europe, the feedback was always positive. This is completely new situation for us, believe me, we are really serious about it. Again, apologize for all the inconvenience.
Take case
不好意思，签名了，编辑掉
[ 本帖最后由 DZstudio 于 2012-11-8 20:26 编辑 ]
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